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If you think I am mean and heartless here: This really happened to the brother of someone I once worked with... They messed up his name with some other guy and such...
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There's a comma missing after bekommen and a second s with dass. Kriegen doesn't look good, better is to use bekommen=erhalten.
In the second pic, you'd better use one sentence instead of two, using three dots for connection.
There are also a few flaws in the engliash subtext.
The ideas are mostly quite funny, once one got used to it.
In the second pic, you'd better use one sentence instead of two, using three dots for connection.
There are also a few flaws in the engliash subtext.
The ideas are mostly quite funny, once one got used to it.
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