The single picture that I have been working on for so long over the summer in between classes and what not.
From a scifi story I may or may not do something with.
Surzii Bahils on a rather large riding bird...need to name it, thinking something like Sashii for her.
Not so sure if Surzii is going to stay a cartographer...I did decrease his age signficantly in my revisions, I think a messenger would be more suited, and still allow some adventures out in the wastelands. Also I changed a few details of the desert since the last picture of him here http://jack07.deviantart.com/art/ca.....lored-88588872 . I made the entire look of Kadehesh alot more red, and dustier for sure. It is a bit more appealing than just endless sand and blue sky.
I probably spent.... a couple weeks or so working on this on and off. I also managed to rework the shading using a technique I learned from Fyuvix
Anyways this is something I am rather proud of, worked ages on it...or feels like it atleast. Some critique will be welcomed.
From a scifi story I may or may not do something with.
Surzii Bahils on a rather large riding bird...need to name it, thinking something like Sashii for her.
Not so sure if Surzii is going to stay a cartographer...I did decrease his age signficantly in my revisions, I think a messenger would be more suited, and still allow some adventures out in the wastelands. Also I changed a few details of the desert since the last picture of him here http://jack07.deviantart.com/art/ca.....lored-88588872 . I made the entire look of Kadehesh alot more red, and dustier for sure. It is a bit more appealing than just endless sand and blue sky.
I probably spent.... a couple weeks or so working on this on and off. I also managed to rework the shading using a technique I learned from Fyuvix
Anyways this is something I am rather proud of, worked ages on it...or feels like it atleast. Some critique will be welcomed.
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 800px
File Size 271.3 kB
Awesome environment, awesome bird. I really like the atmosphere here. =3
I feel like it could use something that gives a feeling of movement. Like tracks in the sand. Surzil looks pretty weary and it would make sense that he'd stop and catch his breath. Or his bearings. Use the environment to tell a story, no matter how subtle, and things become way more interesting.
Still awesome though.
I feel like it could use something that gives a feeling of movement. Like tracks in the sand. Surzil looks pretty weary and it would make sense that he'd stop and catch his breath. Or his bearings. Use the environment to tell a story, no matter how subtle, and things become way more interesting.
Still awesome though.
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