your doing requests ? may i ask for one ?

Most certainly, that would be the point of me saying so Just PM me

Not bad. Her muzzle is way to thin and small, it doesn't look right and the eyes are a bit too close and too wide/big thus lacking the depth they need to show the proper emotion of being surprised like you intended it to be. The anatomy around the shoulder/neck region is bad and much more noticeable compared to the rest of her body like the difference in her figure (one showing it's wider and the other showing it's narrower)

How many requests are you taking?

Thank you for the critique, I only started drawing a week ago. That what the requests are for, practice. As many as I feel like doodling.

its even better in color.

I really like this picture, and I keep wondering what the story is behind it. Are they growing right there and now, or have they been getting larger for some time and she's only just noticing how big the difference is?

Figured they just kinda grew a cup or two right there and then. Just in time for a super tight top at the beach ^.^

Very nice. ^-^ Unintentional/unexplained growth is always pretty sexy.