I find it interesting that throughout the poem you use no punctuation, until the last word. Is there a reason for the one mark at the end? Most readers, when they do read poetry, the seem to like consistency when it comes to punctuation. And publication companies love consistency (I know from experience, LOL). It's an interesting idea, fishing for dreams. If only fishing for them were easy =D.

No real reason, it was unconscious, to be honest. >_>

Good stanazas, and good short rhyme scheme.