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Jamie isn't known for good ideas...
A bit of a long one here, but I couldn't think of a good way to split it up, and I figured you've been starved of content for a while.
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A big thanks to the immensely talented
Rabid_Aardvark for his help editing.
This story is set in the same universe as
Hetzer's amazing integration series, if you haven't already, go check out his amazing stories here https://www.furaffinity.net/view/12573381/
A bit of a long one here, but I couldn't think of a good way to split it up, and I figured you've been starved of content for a while.
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
A big thanks to the immensely talented
Rabid_Aardvark for his help editing.This story is set in the same universe as
Hetzer's amazing integration series, if you haven't already, go check out his amazing stories here https://www.furaffinity.net/view/12573381/
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My only real complaint with the story is, you introduce Meer but he seems to come out of literal no where. I may have missed something in a previous chapter, but hes there, "hey Seans always welcome here", then he's gone. That aside Im absolutely loving the story, anything UTO and well written is an instant favorite for me.
There's actually a chapter 5.75 (I'll sort out chapter numbers when it's done) which features him and gives context to this, where we see how Sean and Tibidni's night at 'The Stomping Grounds' was going while Jamie was busy blowing up the base ;3 There's also a chapter 9.5 planned where we see Jamie and Tibidni get a chance to chat while Sean catches up with his work, before Jamie actually gets released from hospital.
My writing style is very random and non-linear, with me thinking up key scenes and events out of order, then stitching them together where needed (there's a reason I use hard scene transitions so often). It's best to think of the story on FA right now as the first draft, once the whole thing is complete, including extra middle chapters, I'll post a full PDF with all the chapters, and finish organizing the individual chapters already up. I did genuinely want to post it scene by scene, in order, but it has grown as I've written it, so that's not really viable anymore. I'll still not skip scenes though, so chapter 14 will wait for chapter 13 etc.
Long story short, Reputation was supposed to be about 40k words, it's currently over 62k, and not even finished, and much of that came in the middle where I wanted to expand things and elaborate on stuff. Like giving Haynes a little more backstory and personality in chapter 5.5 through his conversation with Tibidni, and giving Tibidni and Sean a little heart to heart in the beginning of chapter 9 to help lengthen it and even out the heavier scene between Jamie and Dr Wu (chapter 9 always felt a little lacking in content, so I wanted to give it a little more going on).
My writing style is very random and non-linear, with me thinking up key scenes and events out of order, then stitching them together where needed (there's a reason I use hard scene transitions so often). It's best to think of the story on FA right now as the first draft, once the whole thing is complete, including extra middle chapters, I'll post a full PDF with all the chapters, and finish organizing the individual chapters already up. I did genuinely want to post it scene by scene, in order, but it has grown as I've written it, so that's not really viable anymore. I'll still not skip scenes though, so chapter 14 will wait for chapter 13 etc.
Long story short, Reputation was supposed to be about 40k words, it's currently over 62k, and not even finished, and much of that came in the middle where I wanted to expand things and elaborate on stuff. Like giving Haynes a little more backstory and personality in chapter 5.5 through his conversation with Tibidni, and giving Tibidni and Sean a little heart to heart in the beginning of chapter 9 to help lengthen it and even out the heavier scene between Jamie and Dr Wu (chapter 9 always felt a little lacking in content, so I wanted to give it a little more going on).
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