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A bit of a writing exercise I've attempted, to see if I can pull of hypnosis well in writing. If y'all like it, I might well write more!
In this story, Clive has invited you round to see his newest invention, and he intends for you to be his test subject in the final test drive for it.
Basically an origin story for those hypno-goggles of his.
Thumbnail art by
Dirgemon
In this story, Clive has invited you round to see his newest invention, and he intends for you to be his test subject in the final test drive for it.
Basically an origin story for those hypno-goggles of his.
Thumbnail art by
Dirgemon
Category Story / Hypnosis
Species Housecat
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 164.2 kB
Listed in Folders
Oh my gosh, I absolutely and utterly adore this!!!
It's short and really really sweet, strangely wholesome and wonderfully toony!
I absolutely adore the use of bold, commanding text, and the snap too with the discription of body language throughout is perfect!!!
I absolutely love the idea and this is a perfect first story!!! Amazing work! ^^
It's short and really really sweet, strangely wholesome and wonderfully toony!
I absolutely adore the use of bold, commanding text, and the snap too with the discription of body language throughout is perfect!!!
I absolutely love the idea and this is a perfect first story!!! Amazing work! ^^
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