It has been a while for me to catch up. Originally I had no idea that this would lead into a pokemon fan fic. It is rare for me to read fan fic works. However, the first story arc was excellent story telling and an intriguing build. However, I suffered lol moments due to several other pokemon virus fanfics (Always an intreseting subject), and the WS infinites end event which evolved America and pokemon (Mcain being captured in pokeitnam).

This has come along nicely, although some concepts both realistically and to the pokemon and real world highly questionable. However, pah fiction is fiction, and fan fiction is fan fiction. Other faces popping up as well. My legativtey also had me suffering Contra Trauma.
You also have a great grasp at expressing the emotions of your characters. I believe you could write something original of your own as well.
Good luck with the rest.