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Thought to try out to see if my short story writing skills still hold up for MacroMarch too.
Based on the characters and stories of
Caudle
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/33973658/
Illustration by
AtmanRyu
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In the abandon building part of the town of Burnel, the self-proclaim “Rem-zilla” was enjoying his new large & in-charge size. His massive paws boomed throughout the empty streets, his long thick tail swaying with his movements, though when they “gently” stroke a nearby building, it did left an impressionable imprint on the bricks and mortar.
The sizeable stoat was enjoying this. He was ready to stomp a tiny 2-story building flat but then he notice some from the corner of his eye. It was the business district of town, and just around the corner was small bank. Just simple branch office to deposit and withdraw. But it was a place with money, so naturally it had Rem’s attention, even as a giant, and made him stop from pressing down his massive foot paw on the crumbling building.
His enlarged ears could hear his brother making his way towards him, but being of normal size, he was still some time off from actually be there. Rem also could make out those 2 mice, Cas and Pol, the later of who made Rem into lovely large form as of now with his “Shrinky-Dink”… much likely to reverse the effect it did to him earlier…
“Hmm… maybe I should make take this time and make it count for a score…”
Rem then stepped over the building to the next street behind it, making his pursuers to go around and take even longer to follow him and ruin his fun. From there, Rem spotted an old blank billboard sign that hug on an old department story building, and right by the bank, was the paint store, complete with giant novelty pain bucket display for show.
This will work well with Rem’s plan.
Taking the billboard and the novelty paint-bucket of black paint, Rem moved over to the side of the bank. Naturally, it was a bank holiday, so it was closed and empty… but it still had money, and that’s all that matters. Rem and Rom always did find the clerks rather snooty, even when they try to make legal withdrawals with personal special “friends” who wanted to give them a good sum of cash for being great close friends of theirs within the spend of 25 minutes of knowing the 2 stoats.
Rem dunk the tip of his titan of a tail in the paint bucket (cause whats the point of showing off a giant pain bucket if it was empty?) and began to make a decent likeness of the bank onto the billboard’s canvas. Rem was sure it was worthy of a Smiley-Face Sticker, even though his talent was foraging half-decent signatures on deeds and checks.
After making his 5-minute masterpiece, Rem was ready to take on the 2nd biggest feat for him for the day. Normally, his bother Rom was the better stretcher/ensnarer of them, but Rem with his newfound size and mass, could easily out do his show-off brother. Moving from the waist up, Rem stretch his torso at the base of the empty bank, turning around each corner of it until he came back to where he started, to which he looped around the building again. He had plenty of extra mass to spare as he heard his body groan deeply as he made several turns around the building.
In a short amount of time, Rem managed to encase the ENTIRE outside of the bank within his yellow sweater. He then began to shift his body mass to make sure he had a real good tight grip on it, but not too much to which to crush it. Even with his thicken fur, skin, and body mass, it was rather snug fit for him, as though he was hugging a well-made doll house, with some minor pointy sides he tried to be mindful of.
“Okay… time for the hard part,” Rem said to himself as he prep himself for this part, “One. Two. THREE!”
Rem then began to lift the bank off from it foundation, using his back to lift it. Grunting from the strain, Rem made sure to his lowest coil of his body secured the whole building, while making sure his coiled around the sides kept it steady and straight, while not applying too much pressure to crush the thing. A little trick he learned from a naga instructor from his college years…
Inside the bank, the whole movement made the building groan and creaked as Rem’s thick clothes, fur, and skin pressed up around it. Even though Rem was careful with the pressure he was applying, the bank’s reinforced structure and windows were just BARELY holding up against the massive mustelid’s mass. If there was someone in there, they would hear a deep pounding noise reverbing from the upper corner of the building where Rem’s huge heart was beating as he performed this literal bank heist.
Not only did Rem had to mind his body pressure on the building, but also made sure to factor in how he lifted the whole thing up a few stories into the sky, like some sort of reverse rope crane. A slight tilt on his part could result in tossed papers or a toppled water cooler in the breakroom. With all things considered, this was the best outcome for Rem to have. He didn’t had to worry about pesky power lines since this was a newer model bank, with underground cables… and built in power generator, so even separated, Rem can still see the lights and (more importantly) the ATMs and computers where still running, ripe for hacking, from the skylight on top of the bank.
Even with his reinforced bodily mass and ability to move like rubber, Rem felt a HUGE strain on his lower back from this lifting method. Fearing of ruining his ability to stretch and his health in general, Rem quickly but gently lowered himself and his cargo back on his lower torso; much like a snake would coil upon itself. Rem kept sure to control and even out his body mass for this part, not to just topple over or lose the ability work with the bank he now ensnared around. This was tricky, even for him; as there was rarely a need to do such a feat within Rem’s line of “work”, but he manage to make his legs still functional while his tail took on more mass to help keep his balance. The only real victim to all of this was the road and sidewalk, which were criminally under-code for an enormous ermine to enjoy casual stroll.
Grabbing his billboard art piece, Rem placed it in the spot where the real bank. Nobody would doubt this was the real thing at all, especially not with the fun little sun Rem drew on there.
Rem then picked up the bucket of paint, hid it behind his coil back. He might have future jobs with it… or just for a fun casual painting session. He did have his hobbies.
With nothing to trace him to this scene, Rem began to whistle innocently as took a light stroll away from the 100% real bank, leaving only foot thumps, paw-craters, paint-splatters from his tail-tip, and small loose dirt & debris from bank’s loose foundation.
Rem was in the clear… until he spotted his brother Rem the twin Siamese mice standing just a few yards away, all three of them giving him a harsh glare…
Rem just stood there, looking down at them.
“What?” he said innocently with his loud bass voice while shrugging, which was also rather loud too.
Based on the characters and stories of
Caudlehttps://www.furaffinity.net/view/33973658/
Illustration by
AtmanRyu~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In the abandon building part of the town of Burnel, the self-proclaim “Rem-zilla” was enjoying his new large & in-charge size. His massive paws boomed throughout the empty streets, his long thick tail swaying with his movements, though when they “gently” stroke a nearby building, it did left an impressionable imprint on the bricks and mortar.
The sizeable stoat was enjoying this. He was ready to stomp a tiny 2-story building flat but then he notice some from the corner of his eye. It was the business district of town, and just around the corner was small bank. Just simple branch office to deposit and withdraw. But it was a place with money, so naturally it had Rem’s attention, even as a giant, and made him stop from pressing down his massive foot paw on the crumbling building.
His enlarged ears could hear his brother making his way towards him, but being of normal size, he was still some time off from actually be there. Rem also could make out those 2 mice, Cas and Pol, the later of who made Rem into lovely large form as of now with his “Shrinky-Dink”… much likely to reverse the effect it did to him earlier…
“Hmm… maybe I should make take this time and make it count for a score…”
Rem then stepped over the building to the next street behind it, making his pursuers to go around and take even longer to follow him and ruin his fun. From there, Rem spotted an old blank billboard sign that hug on an old department story building, and right by the bank, was the paint store, complete with giant novelty pain bucket display for show.
This will work well with Rem’s plan.
Taking the billboard and the novelty paint-bucket of black paint, Rem moved over to the side of the bank. Naturally, it was a bank holiday, so it was closed and empty… but it still had money, and that’s all that matters. Rem and Rom always did find the clerks rather snooty, even when they try to make legal withdrawals with personal special “friends” who wanted to give them a good sum of cash for being great close friends of theirs within the spend of 25 minutes of knowing the 2 stoats.
Rem dunk the tip of his titan of a tail in the paint bucket (cause whats the point of showing off a giant pain bucket if it was empty?) and began to make a decent likeness of the bank onto the billboard’s canvas. Rem was sure it was worthy of a Smiley-Face Sticker, even though his talent was foraging half-decent signatures on deeds and checks.
After making his 5-minute masterpiece, Rem was ready to take on the 2nd biggest feat for him for the day. Normally, his bother Rom was the better stretcher/ensnarer of them, but Rem with his newfound size and mass, could easily out do his show-off brother. Moving from the waist up, Rem stretch his torso at the base of the empty bank, turning around each corner of it until he came back to where he started, to which he looped around the building again. He had plenty of extra mass to spare as he heard his body groan deeply as he made several turns around the building.
In a short amount of time, Rem managed to encase the ENTIRE outside of the bank within his yellow sweater. He then began to shift his body mass to make sure he had a real good tight grip on it, but not too much to which to crush it. Even with his thicken fur, skin, and body mass, it was rather snug fit for him, as though he was hugging a well-made doll house, with some minor pointy sides he tried to be mindful of.
“Okay… time for the hard part,” Rem said to himself as he prep himself for this part, “One. Two. THREE!”
Rem then began to lift the bank off from it foundation, using his back to lift it. Grunting from the strain, Rem made sure to his lowest coil of his body secured the whole building, while making sure his coiled around the sides kept it steady and straight, while not applying too much pressure to crush the thing. A little trick he learned from a naga instructor from his college years…
Inside the bank, the whole movement made the building groan and creaked as Rem’s thick clothes, fur, and skin pressed up around it. Even though Rem was careful with the pressure he was applying, the bank’s reinforced structure and windows were just BARELY holding up against the massive mustelid’s mass. If there was someone in there, they would hear a deep pounding noise reverbing from the upper corner of the building where Rem’s huge heart was beating as he performed this literal bank heist.
Not only did Rem had to mind his body pressure on the building, but also made sure to factor in how he lifted the whole thing up a few stories into the sky, like some sort of reverse rope crane. A slight tilt on his part could result in tossed papers or a toppled water cooler in the breakroom. With all things considered, this was the best outcome for Rem to have. He didn’t had to worry about pesky power lines since this was a newer model bank, with underground cables… and built in power generator, so even separated, Rem can still see the lights and (more importantly) the ATMs and computers where still running, ripe for hacking, from the skylight on top of the bank.
Even with his reinforced bodily mass and ability to move like rubber, Rem felt a HUGE strain on his lower back from this lifting method. Fearing of ruining his ability to stretch and his health in general, Rem quickly but gently lowered himself and his cargo back on his lower torso; much like a snake would coil upon itself. Rem kept sure to control and even out his body mass for this part, not to just topple over or lose the ability work with the bank he now ensnared around. This was tricky, even for him; as there was rarely a need to do such a feat within Rem’s line of “work”, but he manage to make his legs still functional while his tail took on more mass to help keep his balance. The only real victim to all of this was the road and sidewalk, which were criminally under-code for an enormous ermine to enjoy casual stroll.
Grabbing his billboard art piece, Rem placed it in the spot where the real bank. Nobody would doubt this was the real thing at all, especially not with the fun little sun Rem drew on there.
Rem then picked up the bucket of paint, hid it behind his coil back. He might have future jobs with it… or just for a fun casual painting session. He did have his hobbies.
With nothing to trace him to this scene, Rem began to whistle innocently as took a light stroll away from the 100% real bank, leaving only foot thumps, paw-craters, paint-splatters from his tail-tip, and small loose dirt & debris from bank’s loose foundation.
Rem was in the clear… until he spotted his brother Rem the twin Siamese mice standing just a few yards away, all three of them giving him a harsh glare…
Rem just stood there, looking down at them.
“What?” he said innocently with his loud bass voice while shrugging, which was also rather loud too.
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Mustelid (Other)
Size 120 x 93px
File Size 17.4 kB
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