So this was inspired by a guy on Twitter mentioning Paw TF. I was doing a Yoshi story at the time and figured I'll give it a quick go and see what happens!
This is a practice for Transformation stories so any criticism is greatly apricated!
Also yes I used Indigo Yoshi because he's my Yoshi with a foot fetish! X3
CONTENT:
Staring upwards at the huge dinosaur-like creature as it approached you tried your best to crawl away as quickly as you could. The big Yoshi was at least twenty times your height. Despite that it seemed very intent on choosing you to be it's prey. The huge footsteps were accompanied by the huge boots the Yoshi wore. Each time it got closer and closer it stomped down with enough force to knock you over. As such you could only crawl away as fast as you could, but it was not fast enough!
You spun yourself around as the huge left boot came down on your right side, missing you by an inch. The huge orange shoe could've easily crushed you without any grain of mercy. Without any effort on the beast's side at all...
You watched as the Yoshi stood over the top of you. You couldn't move, feeling rooted to the ground by a total fear that consumed you. The giant had you right where he needed you to be, helpless and within his terrible grasp. Whatever he had planed for you, it was his choice. Nothing you could do would save you now. Knowing full well your life was in the hands of a giant known to devour it's prey alive. You simply gulped nervously and saved yourself the trouble of failing to escape. Sat there waiting for the beast to make a move, you quivered with fear...
The beast lifted up it's huge heavy right foot, watching the orange shoe lift from the ground you could hear the material strain as it did. Your breath quickened as for a brief moment it was held above you. You panted and shuddered as you thought for that very moment you would be stamped on and crushed under the heavy shoe, to be ground up into some sort of paste. You gulped nervously, but instead of stomping down and juicing you intently, you watched as the Yoshi gripped his foot with both hands before slowly guiding his shoe of his heel and taking it off with a smile. The soft material slid over his surface with ease before looming over you. Watching as the big Indigo foot slowly emerged from it's cradle you saw past it the smile of the sinister creature. Yoshi was sizing you up. But for what? It remained to be seen...
The Yoshi watched as you looked up weakly at his giant form. You couldn't bear the thought of becoming the monsterous giant's lunch! Luckily, if he wanted to gobble you up, he would've. Easily a macro Yoshi could stick twenty or thirty people onto his massive tongue. In one fell swoop he could snatch them all up and gulp them all down. It seemed your fears were soon replaced as the Yoshi gave the inside of his shoe one quick sniff and looked down at your tiny body. A horrible thought crossed your mind. What if he was to pick you up and shove you into his shoe? What if you were forced to be his new insole against those large sweaty feet? You shuddered at the thought however it quickly became worse as part of that horrific thought was about to come true! His huge, heavy, Indigo and sweaty foot came down with a crash!
"THUD!"
Pressed against the ground in a star shape, your entire body was pressed up and totally unable to move. You whimpered, you cried. All sounds were instead muffled by the soft and squishy flesh of the Indigo foot. You eventually could no longer hold your breath and soon smelt the very pungent scent of Yoshi's foot paws. It smelled as sweaty and cheesy as you imagined it would, never the less it made you gag and cringe all the same. The weight was forced upon you, squeezing all the air out of your body as you sunk further and further into the soft sole of his foot. You could feel the sticky sweat as it clung to you, making your entire body sticky and damp. Trouble seemed to come further as the massive dinosaur like beast lifted his foot up off the floor. You were attached to it! Assuming the sweat had stuck you to the skin you cringed as you were lifted up, the rapid breeze of the air as you were quickly held up to his face passed like you were sticking your head out of a car. Those massive eyes looked down at you with a keen smile. It felt like he was mocking you in some way or another, mocking without sound.
-
You made an attempt to plead but instead only seemed to exhale. Confused you simply autopiloted to take in another breath. Soon finding that you couldn't. Fear began to work up as you questioned how it was possible you were unable to breathe only to relax again. You didn't feel like you were lacking any oxygen. No rush for a breath like when your underwater. No urge to breathe in or out. The beast resumed his stare at his foot and tilted his head. You assumed he felt your last breath and then also didn't feel anymore. He looked almost pleased, but like he knew it was coming. Making an attempt to move, that's when you realised, at long last, what had happened...
You had no body to move!
Your entire body felt like it was still stretched out, yet no pain or weight was being felt anymore. In fact, you soon couldn't feel your arms or legs. Instead your conscious was growing, as if you were suddenly growing into something much bigger and better. Your vision remained at the middle of the bottom of the foot. Sweat trickled by and you were unable to wipe it away, watching it run past what you used to think was your eye. It didn't make you blink or flinch, instead it ran over you and cooled you down, the same way a refreshing drink may. Needless to say the whole situation had you puzzled and the giant was very pleased. He gave his foot a gently press right in the middle. You felt it hard against you. The way your body bent inwards as those huge fingers gently rubbed and pushed inwards. It felt strange but... nice... like a full body massage.
The Yoshi then let go of you and you drifted down naturally to the floor again. Your sight going dark as you pressed against the floor. The feeling of weight returned, this time like a large singular column of it above you. As the Yoshi began walking over to his bed to rest, you were lifted and stepped down time and time again. Each time you did, a small bit of friction warmed you against the floor, pooling more sweat that trickled down and refreshed you, cooling you down once more. The steps were casual at this point, one after the other and every time the other foot came down it was your turn. Lifting up through the air and pressing down against the floor. You could even feel those three big toes as they wiggled idle as he walked the floors of his home.
When he reached his bed he jumped up onto the side and dangled his legs off of the bar along the edge. You felt weight be applied to you as he jumped. It felt like having a very heavy mattress thrown onto you. What would've been a whimper came to mind but of course no sound came from Yoshi's green and exposed foot. He rolled over and lifted his naked Indigo paw back up to his face. With a keen smile he gave it a quick whiff. You wondered in that moment what the foot actually smelt like. Would it retain it's usual sweaty and cheesy sort of smell or would instead have a scent of you among it at all? The question lingered in your mind but soon changed when Yoshi sighed happily and leaned into the bed, picking up a large orange shoe yet again and smiling down at his foot.
He did a half prompt sit up and leaned down, shoe in both hands as he stretched it over his toes and you watched as the soft cotton of the inside came and touched your new body. It was so soft and warm, even at the first touch. The inside of the shoe tightly pressed and stretched to perfectly fit your body as Yoshi pushed you further and further inside, resting you against the insole and wriggling his toes against the lovely cotton. It was warm and snug, only comparable to being in a very tight sleeping bag made of sheep's wool. It felt truly marvellous! Like you were at home almost. The Yoshi of course lay down on his bed and got himself comfortable for a nice long sleep, leaving you inside your warm sleeping bag, comfortable with some trickles of sweat as you adapted to your new life as a Yoshi foot!
This is a practice for Transformation stories so any criticism is greatly apricated!
Also yes I used Indigo Yoshi because he's my Yoshi with a foot fetish! X3
CONTENT:
Staring upwards at the huge dinosaur-like creature as it approached you tried your best to crawl away as quickly as you could. The big Yoshi was at least twenty times your height. Despite that it seemed very intent on choosing you to be it's prey. The huge footsteps were accompanied by the huge boots the Yoshi wore. Each time it got closer and closer it stomped down with enough force to knock you over. As such you could only crawl away as fast as you could, but it was not fast enough!
You spun yourself around as the huge left boot came down on your right side, missing you by an inch. The huge orange shoe could've easily crushed you without any grain of mercy. Without any effort on the beast's side at all...
You watched as the Yoshi stood over the top of you. You couldn't move, feeling rooted to the ground by a total fear that consumed you. The giant had you right where he needed you to be, helpless and within his terrible grasp. Whatever he had planed for you, it was his choice. Nothing you could do would save you now. Knowing full well your life was in the hands of a giant known to devour it's prey alive. You simply gulped nervously and saved yourself the trouble of failing to escape. Sat there waiting for the beast to make a move, you quivered with fear...
The beast lifted up it's huge heavy right foot, watching the orange shoe lift from the ground you could hear the material strain as it did. Your breath quickened as for a brief moment it was held above you. You panted and shuddered as you thought for that very moment you would be stamped on and crushed under the heavy shoe, to be ground up into some sort of paste. You gulped nervously, but instead of stomping down and juicing you intently, you watched as the Yoshi gripped his foot with both hands before slowly guiding his shoe of his heel and taking it off with a smile. The soft material slid over his surface with ease before looming over you. Watching as the big Indigo foot slowly emerged from it's cradle you saw past it the smile of the sinister creature. Yoshi was sizing you up. But for what? It remained to be seen...
The Yoshi watched as you looked up weakly at his giant form. You couldn't bear the thought of becoming the monsterous giant's lunch! Luckily, if he wanted to gobble you up, he would've. Easily a macro Yoshi could stick twenty or thirty people onto his massive tongue. In one fell swoop he could snatch them all up and gulp them all down. It seemed your fears were soon replaced as the Yoshi gave the inside of his shoe one quick sniff and looked down at your tiny body. A horrible thought crossed your mind. What if he was to pick you up and shove you into his shoe? What if you were forced to be his new insole against those large sweaty feet? You shuddered at the thought however it quickly became worse as part of that horrific thought was about to come true! His huge, heavy, Indigo and sweaty foot came down with a crash!
"THUD!"
Pressed against the ground in a star shape, your entire body was pressed up and totally unable to move. You whimpered, you cried. All sounds were instead muffled by the soft and squishy flesh of the Indigo foot. You eventually could no longer hold your breath and soon smelt the very pungent scent of Yoshi's foot paws. It smelled as sweaty and cheesy as you imagined it would, never the less it made you gag and cringe all the same. The weight was forced upon you, squeezing all the air out of your body as you sunk further and further into the soft sole of his foot. You could feel the sticky sweat as it clung to you, making your entire body sticky and damp. Trouble seemed to come further as the massive dinosaur like beast lifted his foot up off the floor. You were attached to it! Assuming the sweat had stuck you to the skin you cringed as you were lifted up, the rapid breeze of the air as you were quickly held up to his face passed like you were sticking your head out of a car. Those massive eyes looked down at you with a keen smile. It felt like he was mocking you in some way or another, mocking without sound.
-
You made an attempt to plead but instead only seemed to exhale. Confused you simply autopiloted to take in another breath. Soon finding that you couldn't. Fear began to work up as you questioned how it was possible you were unable to breathe only to relax again. You didn't feel like you were lacking any oxygen. No rush for a breath like when your underwater. No urge to breathe in or out. The beast resumed his stare at his foot and tilted his head. You assumed he felt your last breath and then also didn't feel anymore. He looked almost pleased, but like he knew it was coming. Making an attempt to move, that's when you realised, at long last, what had happened...
You had no body to move!
Your entire body felt like it was still stretched out, yet no pain or weight was being felt anymore. In fact, you soon couldn't feel your arms or legs. Instead your conscious was growing, as if you were suddenly growing into something much bigger and better. Your vision remained at the middle of the bottom of the foot. Sweat trickled by and you were unable to wipe it away, watching it run past what you used to think was your eye. It didn't make you blink or flinch, instead it ran over you and cooled you down, the same way a refreshing drink may. Needless to say the whole situation had you puzzled and the giant was very pleased. He gave his foot a gently press right in the middle. You felt it hard against you. The way your body bent inwards as those huge fingers gently rubbed and pushed inwards. It felt strange but... nice... like a full body massage.
The Yoshi then let go of you and you drifted down naturally to the floor again. Your sight going dark as you pressed against the floor. The feeling of weight returned, this time like a large singular column of it above you. As the Yoshi began walking over to his bed to rest, you were lifted and stepped down time and time again. Each time you did, a small bit of friction warmed you against the floor, pooling more sweat that trickled down and refreshed you, cooling you down once more. The steps were casual at this point, one after the other and every time the other foot came down it was your turn. Lifting up through the air and pressing down against the floor. You could even feel those three big toes as they wiggled idle as he walked the floors of his home.
When he reached his bed he jumped up onto the side and dangled his legs off of the bar along the edge. You felt weight be applied to you as he jumped. It felt like having a very heavy mattress thrown onto you. What would've been a whimper came to mind but of course no sound came from Yoshi's green and exposed foot. He rolled over and lifted his naked Indigo paw back up to his face. With a keen smile he gave it a quick whiff. You wondered in that moment what the foot actually smelt like. Would it retain it's usual sweaty and cheesy sort of smell or would instead have a scent of you among it at all? The question lingered in your mind but soon changed when Yoshi sighed happily and leaned into the bed, picking up a large orange shoe yet again and smiling down at his foot.
He did a half prompt sit up and leaned down, shoe in both hands as he stretched it over his toes and you watched as the soft cotton of the inside came and touched your new body. It was so soft and warm, even at the first touch. The inside of the shoe tightly pressed and stretched to perfectly fit your body as Yoshi pushed you further and further inside, resting you against the insole and wriggling his toes against the lovely cotton. It was warm and snug, only comparable to being in a very tight sleeping bag made of sheep's wool. It felt truly marvellous! Like you were at home almost. The Yoshi of course lay down on his bed and got himself comfortable for a nice long sleep, leaving you inside your warm sleeping bag, comfortable with some trickles of sweat as you adapted to your new life as a Yoshi foot!
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Ooh this one's pretty cool. Nice descriptions and size ratio. The transition of gaining and losing different senses can be difficult to imagine for this kind of thing but I think you guided the reader through it quite well. Probably my favorite part of this is the implication that Indigo knows exactly what he's doing and it's going just as he expects.
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