I realize that this is a pretty basic and simplistic page. I struggled for a long time trying to figure out how to make this part of the script look visually interesting; originally, this was going to be another several-panel page (like the previous one), but one of my planned panels was going to be YET ANOTHER landscape shot. I was already getting tired of constantly drawing environments, and I was a bit frustrated with trying to recreate the environment I had chosen to draw in that particular panel. After trying and failing several times, I scrapped the panels entirely and tried to improvise something. It took me an extra three days to figure out what I wanted to do. I like slower-paced pages, so I went for another page with just a single "panel" and tried to make it flow with the script. I'm happy with how this page turned out, but it probably could have gone a little more smoothly.

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