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Under Canadian Trees - by Wolfshy
Well, now that it's off the front page, I wont feel so awkward submitting it, hohoho.
This was a lovely poem I commissioned from my good friend
WolfShy
I'm not a good judge of poetry, but I like rhyming, and this has rhyming ^o^
(It's also very sweet)
If you like this, GO CHECK OUT Wolfshy's PROFILE NAO!! RAWR!
This was a lovely poem I commissioned from my good friend
WolfShyI'm not a good judge of poetry, but I like rhyming, and this has rhyming ^o^
(It's also very sweet)
If you like this, GO CHECK OUT
Wolfshy's PROFILE NAO!! RAWR!
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 100px
File Size 964 B
Hmmm.. Well I do disagree on this one =/ sod and mud rhymes well if you ask me~ the second one, well, it is a bit stretched, but from a poetic writing view, it does rhyme =) as thing can rhyme in sound or spelling. I do agree demeanor and container aren't the best pair, but they fit well enough for the message I wished to convay =)
Thanks sweetie =) and thanks for pointing it out ^^ I do appreciate your opinion very much =3 this was quite hard for me to write as it was the first rhyming poem for me in 7 years x.x and the topic commission to write wasn't the easiest for my kind of poetry =3 but I am quite satisfied with how it turned out despite that ^_^ thanks again for being pretty much my first constructive critique =)
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