I thought the filtering was done tastefully.
Kinda funky beat with the bass and the homophonic bits, I dig it.
The plucky instrument for the lyrical melody wasn't my favorite, though the melody itself was pretty good.
And yes :) Music Making Is Fun
Keep it up!

Thank you.

That was nice. I liked how it all played together. I enjoyed the beat and how you worked the other sounds. So awesome job man. I saved it.

Thank you so much, do you know of anything you'd like to see in a song kinda like this?

Well, with the plucky sounds it seemed like you could have made it more an oriental side. So that could be interesting to see. But I also imagined in my head of a good time dancing. So you could just make it longer and do a little more of the club vibe for it.

Hehe, Well As much as i wanted to make a club vibe for it, I still have to put up a few more songs for my Chill album. I'm gonna be walking around from workout places, delis, hotels, yoga centere ect to see if i can get my music in those places.

well I could definitely seea workout for this kinda song. For yoga though you'd have to take the big bass beats out.

Ah yes, for working out, and yoga, that would be more focused towards something else. But for this, I was going for lounge hopefully with the funky beat ^^.

Lounge is my favorite genre of music

I gives it a 4 outta 5

Here is why.

Very soft fun tones love the beat you went with but I think it should have some vocals you have a beautiful voice and would fit well into this song.

Thank you for the imput, it actually makes me want to sing lol

Excellent. Very chill ^^ The delay on that first pluck was used rather tastefully

The piano could have used a little more release. It needed to fill out a bit.

You did a wicked job of organizing your sounds here. There was a lot going on at some points, but it didn't get busy or 'muddy' at all.

Great as a fun track, or as background music, but would need a little more 'meat' to be a full track on its own :p

Overall 7-10 ^^ nice work

It's good that yer reaching out for constructive criticism. Too often people either don't comment, or just leave a "yeaa, untz untz cool i like" lol

I hope skunkie talked to you today about my current situation man.

and yes indeed it is. I'm not just looking for the "OMFG I LOVE YOU " comments anymore because after i finish my chill cd, i'm going to the hotels, lounges, cafe's, etc to get my music out there.

I wanna show the world and i think i'm almost ready.

Awesome!