another good one rikux, I thought that kelly was actually pretty understanding about the whole dyose thing and letting chris go after him. whenever chris was saying goodbye to her I almost thought she was going to leave him

She likes him too much to leave him Xl

She likes him too much to leave him Xl

This is an awesome ending to the chapter, I must say that I can't wait to see what happens next.

Woaah...
And again, you let it end in such a way I want to continue reading...
So frustrating...

Maybe he's not totally evil Naw its not that. I dunno. I just wrote it like that?

Nope. Although that would be kinda interresting.

"Now you must find it by... Uhh.... A certian time!"

"Wait.... Who am I? Lets see, Dark robe, spooky mask.... Is it halloween?"

Maybe I should write all the next parts like this. It would be kinda easy.

BIt Id doubt itd be as popular.

Why thank you! But now Im gonna make him have memory lose. It seems like a good idea.

The Dyose SAGA! S-A-G-A! Maximuim not smart!

Or the Epic of Dyose. You can call it that.

That could work.

The Dyose chronicles

Clever. Or ever better 'Crazy guy with mask does a bunch of stuff.'

Or the best title ever "I was too lazy to think of a title."

Or the best kind "Enter Title here."

Or even better. "You dont get no title Bi***es!"

I think some people would get mad at that one.

Screw book sales! Oh wait. Thats how authors get money. Never mind

Never mind about the rebellion. If I dont have monay than I cant pay for junk! And if I cant pay for junk I wont have internet! If I dont have internet I dont get FA!

Maybe you should get a who;e bunch load of people to go buy my nonexistent book!

Do it! IT will get many award eventually!

But only when I actually BECOME a famous author. *if ever.*

I guess I could try to get it published. I just have to finish it and find a publisher. And stop being lazy.

indeed it is. I just need some motivation.

Im making slow prgress on The Man of My crazy dreams but its slower than Id like it to be.

Well the biggest factor is motivation. Im just not 'feeling it' if you know what I mean. And if I try to force it my work turns out to be crap.

Well the first two parts to Dyose dont really fit with the rest of the story. The trick is just to keep writing forward instead of always going back and corrcting stuff. Unless if you plan to turn it into a novel or something no one really cares about how well the first part matches up with the last and whatnot.

It makes me wonder if I can really make a living off of this.

keep your head down and power through. If I could give my opinoin give more detail into his life.

Yep. Thats pretty much it.

It would be a hard life due to all the times I get writers block.

Sure why not? I worn you I might be busy so you'll probably wont get a quick response but Ill be happy to!

Well I would get more into his personality.

Why thanks! Its kinda a looking back on it thing. I probably wont change it but its what I wish I wrote differently.

True, I have a lot of ideas its just that I want to see them on paper faster than I can write so I get ahead of myself.

What a revamp? With only one part posted? Well you write as you please.

Oop. I meant for your story. Get more into the character.

Aw thanks! I just wish I could get some people who actually read them

I know exactly what you mean!