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This is the first and maybe only story I post. Think of it as a test of my skills. There is unwilling perma vore
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Hey, this is pretty dang good man! There’s a lot to like here, and I think you do some tricky things rather well! The only mistakes you make are easy fixes that you’d make less with more practice, or maybe are only there because you were a bit tired while writing lol
Honestly, I think if you want to put in some dedication to practice some, you’d have some really respectable writing skills ^^
Honestly, I think if you want to put in some dedication to practice some, you’d have some really respectable writing skills ^^
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