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Part 1) http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4052129
Part 2) http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4063434
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shiftshaper
Morgan is a successful businessman who struggles with frustration and inert loathing towards his best friend and flatmate, Derik. Derik, an artist who is unable to keep a job, despairs of the gradual alienation of his only friend, desiring to crawl into the darkest corner of the earth and disappear. Whether they like t or not, though, the two are stuck together...or are they?
Part 2) http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4063434
A collaboration with
shiftshaper Morgan is a successful businessman who struggles with frustration and inert loathing towards his best friend and flatmate, Derik. Derik, an artist who is unable to keep a job, despairs of the gradual alienation of his only friend, desiring to crawl into the darkest corner of the earth and disappear. Whether they like t or not, though, the two are stuck together...or are they?
Category Story / Transformation
Species Mouse
Size 97 x 120px
File Size 30.7 kB
But ... it seems so sad and dark. I'm sorry wrath, it was an interesting tf, but I could never really fave a story like this. He's abusing his room mate. Even if the room mate doesn't mind it. It just seems wrong. I understand he feels like it's apyback, but now that the debt has been paid, I think that the pikachu should be able to return to human form. Maybe even get a little payback. That's just me though.
Well, I'm personally sorry you didn't enjoy this story, but I don't think your opinion actually reflects the story's quality. I'm also afraid I won't compromise THIS particular part of the story as the sinister overtones of the plot only make sense for it to be confronted and uncompromising, but the story's not finished yet. This is only the first half.
It's good x3 they only thing I could complain about is the loss of self. I mean the stories great, real great, but when the subject doesn't recall it the least from before they can't epershate or depending regret it 8p. But that's jus my critic as a TF lover, great story, and I look forward to the next.
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