Ok this is chapters Seven and Eight of When You Wish Upon a Star.
Again, there is so much of this story that I love. Yet I also want to scream at my past self to pick a perspective. That being said here it is. The plan is to keep trying to make any small edits that I can without just completely scraping it doing a rewrite.
So, if you like it maybe leave a comment. Good or bad it will just encourage me to get more of it posted here.
Chapter seven