hmm, awesome.

This made me laugh X3

teehee i try X3

You said brutal I'll hand it to you ^^

First the good things you did, Fantastic work on the anatomy well done, the color and the shading are very well done as well Keep that up! The feet are well done and don't look awkward either.


Some things to work on, Try a few background work, but don't over do it, (even I need to work on that badly lol) The hair seems very Un-hair like, almost unkept in the bad sort of way, It looks fine on top of her head but when it gets to her back try some different things to see what work out for you ,

The pose is a bit awkward, look at you own body and what comes naturally for posing, or have a model to help you. and look at you hands when you hold something with fabric,

All in all this is a fine piece of work and i hope to see it evolve, you have a lot of potential, great coloring work many can't get that down correctly and you have it pinned.

thank you very much!!! i very much appreciate the critique

I'm trying to get my backgrounds better - i've never been very good at them lol

I'll keep this in mind for future drawings! again - thank you so much!!!!!

no problem ^^

D'aww <3

Must be very enjoyable stealing people's pants with such an expression.

oooh yes.... you have no idea :3 especially when her pants...er panties come off and the boys get a look at her hardware XD