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Yes! Chapter four and we finally have the cast together!
So far this has been my most difficult chapter to write, and has actually resulted in me getting behind on my schedule so that I'll have to hurry to have a chapter for next week. For the longest time I just couldn't figure out how to write Cliff or how he would interact with Peacemaker. Finally I found a relationship that works, in that they're both these enthusiastic, hard to offend characters who just immediately strike a cord with each other and start bickering like an old married couple. I love them.
Also, I had a lot of fun writing how I think the look of the school has evolved over five years, while still making sure to reference Moon Rising and keep the layout consistent with canon.
No critique desired. Please respect that.
Wings of Fire belongs to Tui T. Sutherland
The story and writing belongs to me, and you are not permitted to reupload, repurpose, or otherwise redistribute it in any way.
So far this has been my most difficult chapter to write, and has actually resulted in me getting behind on my schedule so that I'll have to hurry to have a chapter for next week. For the longest time I just couldn't figure out how to write Cliff or how he would interact with Peacemaker. Finally I found a relationship that works, in that they're both these enthusiastic, hard to offend characters who just immediately strike a cord with each other and start bickering like an old married couple. I love them.
Also, I had a lot of fun writing how I think the look of the school has evolved over five years, while still making sure to reference Moon Rising and keep the layout consistent with canon.
No critique desired. Please respect that.
Wings of Fire belongs to Tui T. Sutherland
The story and writing belongs to me, and you are not permitted to reupload, repurpose, or otherwise redistribute it in any way.
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By the Sun, your writing is so good. Really enjoying the way yo depict things, not too lonwinded, not too shallow. And the relationship between Peacemaker and Moonwatcher are so wholesome too. Cliff's attitude is amazing too and the dynamic he has with Peacemaker, aaaaggh! I love it.
AND WHO'S THIS NEW NIGHTWING TOO??? To be fair, these latest paragraphs where you describe Peacemaker meeting her for the first time has a good impact, feels very important, and you conveyed the emotions well there.
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! Oh, thats what I would have said if I was reading it the moment it was posted *grins*
AND WHO'S THIS NEW NIGHTWING TOO??? To be fair, these latest paragraphs where you describe Peacemaker meeting her for the first time has a good impact, feels very important, and you conveyed the emotions well there.
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! Oh, thats what I would have said if I was reading it the moment it was posted *grins*
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