Love the beat and guitar Nice work and i really like the end from 2:20

i'm telling you "it's all about the he said she said bullshit" *hugs* i love you and hope to have my suit by ac so we can haz romp

Yeah, man, fuck 'em. FUCK 'EM, I say. Bastids...

i'm telling you, boof. i have no time for the hatehs

Got my internet functioning again, so I thought I'd take a listen! Nice attack on the lyrics, you really sold the raw, exposed nature of the song. My only critiques would be that first; the pacing sounds a little rushed in parts, and second; in my opinion, the processing on the voice is a little much. While it adds texture, I feel like it loses something of 'your' sound in the process, making the emotion a little artificial at times. However, what is here is a nice job indeed bud, and you should be really proud. Thanks for sharing!

i hear ya, i just wish i could have played with this a little more. i was just like "oh well, i'll just post it"...from now on, i vow to take more pride in my music

I think you did great bud, regardless of the things I mentioned, I think it came out very nicely, and you should definately take more pride in your work, you deserve to!

thanks for being nice. i love you