Gone over it with a softer pencil. (Darker more solid lines.)
Not Jax. Probably. Arm is a bit wonky. But I have accomplished something.
Longer tail, was going to make it thicker at the base but it looked too weird at the angle.
I stared at owls feet for awhile... Among other ones. Think five toed will work fine with being able to walk around.
Still not nailing a more stork like neck very well.
Went for a frazzled puffed out look.