This is a commission I did on tumblr which features one of my primary OC villains, Koloss, getting stuffed beyond belief due to a series of poor word choices and a bet placed by his two cronies, Mako and Mauler.
The ORIGINAL plan was to have this done by Christmas time, but between my schedule and the insanity going on in the world, plans were changed. But either way, hope y'all enjoy seeing this greedy croc get stuffed WAY beyond his limit. :P
The ORIGINAL plan was to have this done by Christmas time, but between my schedule and the insanity going on in the world, plans were changed. But either way, hope y'all enjoy seeing this greedy croc get stuffed WAY beyond his limit. :P
Category Story / Vore
Species Alligator / Crocodile
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 188.6 kB
these three have got to be among my favourites out of your characters. Love that goofy, excitable Mako, and Mauler...man...there's just something about that ravenous mutant <3
the top croc Koloss being stuffed to the brim is a treat to read, of course--someone like him will always rise to the challenge, huh? Whatever counts as a challenge to a big, bulky pred like him, anyways.
the top croc Koloss being stuffed to the brim is a treat to read, of course--someone like him will always rise to the challenge, huh? Whatever counts as a challenge to a big, bulky pred like him, anyways.
Something I love about your work is that you never take it too seriously, BUT you take it juuust seriously enough. See, when things are TOO silly, I fail to see the appeal, so to speak; there's a thin line that stands between what I consider just plain funny and what I consider "funny, but also appealing."
This is a fine example of that, because this story was HILARIOUS basically from start to finish, yet you also did a phenomenal job at making sure all of the "fun stuff" was in place in a way that really grabs the attention and appeals to the reader.
Of course, the fact it involves our favorite big-bellied crocodile (the other one, anyway) probably helps.
Well done, comrade!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
This is a fine example of that, because this story was HILARIOUS basically from start to finish, yet you also did a phenomenal job at making sure all of the "fun stuff" was in place in a way that really grabs the attention and appeals to the reader.
Of course, the fact it involves our favorite big-bellied crocodile (the other one, anyway) probably helps.
Well done, comrade!
Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master
As always, you're far too kind, amigo! :)
This was a generally silly scenario, but my goal with every commission is to try and make everything at least feel like it could be SEMI-believable. And Koloss IS a bit of a Saturday morning cartoon baddy, so. :P
I'm just glad the humor worked for you, and I hope you enjoy his canonical appearances once I continue further in the actual chapters. ;)
This was a generally silly scenario, but my goal with every commission is to try and make everything at least feel like it could be SEMI-believable. And Koloss IS a bit of a Saturday morning cartoon baddy, so. :P
I'm just glad the humor worked for you, and I hope you enjoy his canonical appearances once I continue further in the actual chapters. ;)
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