Really quick coloring job (for me anyway). Skirts still kick my butt after all this time.
Meme from
Onnaevilsmith
Meme from
Onnaevilsmith
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Mouse
Size 1280 x 800px
File Size 182.6 kB
The main factor is visual appeal. Both versions are about 3 and a half heads tall, but on the original drawing the head, torso, and hips are all about the same size, which is visually uninteresting. On the current version her head is biggest, her torso is smallest, and her hips are in between. A larger head in proportion to the body is cuter and makes her seem shorter. A small torso and big hips emphasizes both that she is an adult and not a little girl, and also that she is maybe a little out of shape from a sedentary lifestyle. =)
The original head design is just incorrect. The face takes up too much of the head-- her eyes are set too high and there is not enough forehead. On the current design I have dropped the eyeline way down, which makes her muzzle smaller and cuter, and pushes her cheeks closer to her eyes, making it easier to draw expressions. Her eyes are bigger and more expressive. The forehead is larger, which makes her look younger and cuter.
I am constantly tweaking character proportions. I think that in this particular picture I pushed her face too cute. If I drew it again I'd make her eyes smaller and give her less forehead. Her ears have also been getting out of control lately. ^^;
The sculpture shows a more intermediate version, which I still like in many ways. I'm trying to work out a balance. I tend to use more stylized proportions when drawing her in the comic, because it is easier to be consistent that way.
The original head design is just incorrect. The face takes up too much of the head-- her eyes are set too high and there is not enough forehead. On the current design I have dropped the eyeline way down, which makes her muzzle smaller and cuter, and pushes her cheeks closer to her eyes, making it easier to draw expressions. Her eyes are bigger and more expressive. The forehead is larger, which makes her look younger and cuter.
I am constantly tweaking character proportions. I think that in this particular picture I pushed her face too cute. If I drew it again I'd make her eyes smaller and give her less forehead. Her ears have also been getting out of control lately. ^^;
The sculpture shows a more intermediate version, which I still like in many ways. I'm trying to work out a balance. I tend to use more stylized proportions when drawing her in the comic, because it is easier to be consistent that way.
Elise sure does emit that soothing gentle glow better in the current version but I still see it in the old one too. I don't know what is, maybe its just the character that you gave her that does it. But - geeze man. . . she's cute as a button either way.
And, it IS a different fork. . . huh, the one on the left is more structured or squared, while the one on the right is more smooth or round. Either why, I have to say I'm concerned for my safety while she's carrying a dangerous weapon like that!
And, it IS a different fork. . . huh, the one on the left is more structured or squared, while the one on the right is more smooth or round. Either why, I have to say I'm concerned for my safety while she's carrying a dangerous weapon like that!
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