You SHOULD be proud of this one, mon ami. It is a splendid work, and particularly exceptional improvement since you started doodling.

I got a good teacher and supporters else, I would likely have quited in depression I think. Nor would never ever thought I would have drawn anything.

I also probably can tell, doodle is partly limiting me (My lack of precision to draw tiny detail, which as you can see is overcome in SAI), only partaly thou, I can't blame doodle for all: there is skill (or lack of) envolved too. But, I need to learn to walk before being able to run, right? Learned a lot from seeing you and Sparrow doodle.

Now if I can overcome my "it was a lucky shoot" mentality and keep going it will be awesome.

very well done chauve i see you enjoy SAI =D do more pics in it cause this is just exceptional

It makes alot of thinks easier for me, I can corrcetly draw details in SAI. Which translates into better control. With better controls, I can put more details, like Rose's pendant.

I can also put Fox's advise more easily into practice, as exemple, can more eaisly make Rose and Phoenix with curvier lines and Vampire more eaiser straight lines, like a box as Fox said. I can show better Phoenix is a bit taller than Rose. I like how Vampire turned more different from Rose, not only "slightly taller+band+different color" he also looks stronger and boxy. So Now, If I wish I can say "Rose would be the average, Phoenix, being devired from Vampire's colony stlighty taller than average, then Vampire down right too big cause CS tends to exagerate".

Now if I can thing of a name for Rose and Vampire respective colony and hobby for Phoenix. + the luck shot thingy :d