Wow, just wow.

It became even better. Once narrator is not part of the story, you can show more details which Redum does not see. It is okay for FTHR-1 and others, even if you decide to keep story from the eyes of Redum, it can be still great - there are no extra words or aestetic description of interier or outfit or appearence - nah, you can draw it and you do it when needed.

Even knowing the idea and the arts, I still worried for FTHR-1 and wondered how she came to humans and contacted them. Great idea to keep it in a secret for couple more articles and let Redum say what happened while everyone are mystified - when characters and reader has the same questions to thereality, it is much more interesting to read.

Thank you so much for all your effort on publishing here these pieces of the story - I'm interested in this theme since I was 17- contact of non-human being and human, especially difficult one. With conspiracy, confidential materials, secrets, trying to be part of other's world and hope for a romance.
The friend of mine tried to write such thing back in that time, and still working on his universe.
I try to tell the story like that, but far far in the future from the first contact, when there are several sapiens species in isolated common world, living together and still have some worries when they feel attached to person from other kind.

And here is you, writing your story, reminding me why I dreamed about something like that, making me feel that way again, after 13 years.

Thank you so much from my heart.

That's so nice. Thank you! 😊 That motivates me to write again.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far.