Just a little sonnet I cooked up at work; the idea just "popped" into my head all of a sudden! I suppose my previous flower plucking poem influenced it. As one of my previous commentators told me, I seem to have a thing for wanting to describe those well known concepts in an innovative manner. ^^
And yes..."that" word is not a misprint. xD
Nothing more to say here--enjoy! :3
Until next poem. =D
And yes..."that" word is not a misprint. xD
Nothing more to say here--enjoy! :3
Until next poem. =D
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Yikes! (o.o)
Very unexpected! :U
Well, I'm ever so glad to hear you think so, Max--better even than "Sleepless Neon" (not to compare between my own works)? x3
Of course, I would imagine that this poem is good from beginning to end, while that poem hits home mostly at the end. ^^'
Anyhoo, your comment is quite appreciated, Mister Goof, sir. =O
Very unexpected! :U
Well, I'm ever so glad to hear you think so, Max--better even than "Sleepless Neon" (not to compare between my own works)? x3
Of course, I would imagine that this poem is good from beginning to end, while that poem hits home mostly at the end. ^^'
Anyhoo, your comment is quite appreciated, Mister Goof, sir. =O
Hehe, thanks, Ethan! :3
Well, you know how I am with my creative details. Also, a "weeping willow," eh? Interesting, I guess I now have a double reference, as the act of "crying" in this case was synonymous to that of rain. Still, that's a very colorful interpretation! =O
Glad you enjoyed it ^^
Well, you know how I am with my creative details. Also, a "weeping willow," eh? Interesting, I guess I now have a double reference, as the act of "crying" in this case was synonymous to that of rain. Still, that's a very colorful interpretation! =O
Glad you enjoyed it ^^
Why the heroic couplet of a sonnet should ALWAYS be well written, Yavy!--it nearly carries the whole weight of the poem! =O
And thanks, the title is indeed rather unique, but conveys exactly what I want it to. ^^
Hehe, you know how I am when it comes to portraying the world. I cherish my poetic vision; it's always crafty and colorful! ;D
And thanks, the title is indeed rather unique, but conveys exactly what I want it to. ^^
Hehe, you know how I am when it comes to portraying the world. I cherish my poetic vision; it's always crafty and colorful! ;D
Ug. The problem with stumbling upon your sonnet days after it was posted is that it becomes very difficult to laud it in ways that haven't yet been said! So, um, this is well-written, with great imagery as always, making love once again sound like such a beautiful and timeless treasure, and... um...
*dances a little jig* ta-da! (Thank you, thank you - I'll be here all week!)
*dances a little jig* ta-da! (Thank you, thank you - I'll be here all week!)
Why thank you, Russ! x3
Such clever phrases tend to surface when I'm at work outside, immersed in nature. ^^
And yes, I do believe that would be a GRAND idea! That ideology is actually the root of most of my poetic topics; after all, I thoroughly enjoy portraying the common things in a uniquely, colorful light. =)
Such clever phrases tend to surface when I'm at work outside, immersed in nature. ^^
And yes, I do believe that would be a GRAND idea! That ideology is actually the root of most of my poetic topics; after all, I thoroughly enjoy portraying the common things in a uniquely, colorful light. =)
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