I have finally added a little thing at the top, to explain the question in the comic. But I realise that is not your primary concern. Your main concern is these filthy humans who are, inexplicably, soiling your furry pr0nz site. Allow me to explain; I am making a second comic series (Well, if I were making it, it would be my first, as I am not 'making' Something Wicked so much as wishing it into existence. However, I am not making this one either, so there goes that complaint) with mostly human characters. These are two of the main ones, Pete and Sarah, along with Pete's room-mate and best friend Josh.
However, fear not! They also live with a sarcastic talking kangaroo called Kevin, there's an insane dog next door called Zeke, and their favourite bar is run by a chinese zombie. Therein lies your fix of anthropomorphism. Yes, yes, ok, so a zombie isn't exactly an anthro, but the kangaroo's naked, so he counts as two <_<
That said, I'm now going to be lazy and copy paste my comments from SmackJeeves:
Pleh. Once again it looked so much better pencilled, inking these characters just kills them. Shows I need the practice.
Practice and fire. Lots of fire.
Anyhoo, art is kinda poor, joke is kinda poor, Pete's expression in the last panel looks nothing like how I wanted it too, and his blush (Yes, that's supposed to be a blush) the panel before looks like I slipped with my pen.
...
Repeatedly.
Sarah also comes off looking stupider than she should. She's not supposed to look like some dumb blonde (She's actually a brunette, but that's another matter) it's just that she's known Pete since they were kids, and now lives next door to him, so she sees him as a kind of brother. As such, she doesn't expect that he has a massive crush on her.
Also, everyone thinks he's gay. Which he isn't, but damn is he camp.
However, fear not! They also live with a sarcastic talking kangaroo called Kevin, there's an insane dog next door called Zeke, and their favourite bar is run by a chinese zombie. Therein lies your fix of anthropomorphism. Yes, yes, ok, so a zombie isn't exactly an anthro, but the kangaroo's naked, so he counts as two <_<
That said, I'm now going to be lazy and copy paste my comments from SmackJeeves:
Pleh. Once again it looked so much better pencilled, inking these characters just kills them. Shows I need the practice.
Practice and fire. Lots of fire.
Anyhoo, art is kinda poor, joke is kinda poor, Pete's expression in the last panel looks nothing like how I wanted it too, and his blush (Yes, that's supposed to be a blush) the panel before looks like I slipped with my pen.
...
Repeatedly.
Sarah also comes off looking stupider than she should. She's not supposed to look like some dumb blonde (She's actually a brunette, but that's another matter) it's just that she's known Pete since they were kids, and now lives next door to him, so she sees him as a kind of brother. As such, she doesn't expect that he has a massive crush on her.
Also, everyone thinks he's gay. Which he isn't, but damn is he camp.
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