Hey everyone. So I wanted to try and experiment with a couple different things, primarily exploring other franchises. I still have a whole heap of ideas for stories, but this one was a fun little venture into something different. At 18 pages, there is a good amount of stuff, but I did spend a bit of tie establishing atmosphere.
All in all, I would be really curious to hear more feedback on this one. Do the characters seem well enough written? is the scenery compelling? Is the story itself fun to read? Let me know what you think, and stay tuned for another little experiment coming out here in not too terribly long.
All in all, I would be really curious to hear more feedback on this one. Do the characters seem well enough written? is the scenery compelling? Is the story itself fun to read? Let me know what you think, and stay tuned for another little experiment coming out here in not too terribly long.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 155.5 kB
You think so? I mean, I know a couple of writers who write stuff a lot longer than this, and some of my other stuff dwarf this piece in length. Regardless, I'm really happy you enjoyed it. I agree about the tickling. I do want to expand on this setting, so maybe a sequel will soon come.
Don't fret, I may have taken some steps to approach a different subject, but I certainly do not plan to abandon the ponies. My next upload will likely be a pony piece depending on how progress goes.
Don't fret, I may have taken some steps to approach a different subject, but I certainly do not plan to abandon the ponies. My next upload will likely be a pony piece depending on how progress goes.
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