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Sandbar the Earth Pony was quite excited and happy today as he got a nice day-off at the nearby beach for getting a good grade in the School of Friendship that he was enrolled in. Twilight, with the new potions that she had worked on which were transformative in many ways also had a plan for him too, giving two bottles to him which one was a a brown colored flask with a picture of a sand splotch with a starfish on it, it smelt a bit...sandy. The other was a pink, sweet-smelling flask which had the two gender symbols together, in which Twilight told him to take the latter first before the former. Sandbar gave another excited squee...not only that he was going to the beach he was taking two of these transformational potions to try along with him! And to that, grabbing his inflatable surfboard, which was previously transformed for fun by Twilight which still functioned despite its rubbery anatomy, what fun.
Now cutting to the said beach with a suspiciously laying around Beach Ball colored in a certain Changeling's scheme...and a normal Palm Tree. Sandbar sighed, letting the hot sun drape over his lime green fur coat and hair, thus after finding a nice sandy mid-area of it he took out the potions from the little saddle pack and placed them down. And without further ado, He thus took the the Gender Potion and thus took a nice glug of it and smacked his lips. it tasted like cherry to the Colt...for now... As his body began to tingle quite after three seconds which made him gasp.
TG Sequence Start!:
Sandbar could feel a ruffling feeling in his mane and tail for the first part which urged him to scratch his head. As he did that...he noticed his mane was starting to grow and strand down, becoming more longer and wavy like water as they seemed to feel a lot smoother than a Colt's mane...it was more prominent at the rear as his hair there was reaching down to his shoulders of his front hooves! His tail was also starting to shake and quiver like it was cold, but it felt warm strangely. It was starting to grow longer too, becoming a lot more wavy as a result as the tail began to droop down from the new weight of the new strands. Though the weight wasn't much.
Next up in the sequence was his eyes as they began to expand a lot larger now, becoming a bit narrowed in with eyelashes starting to sprout and grow out the outer rims of the aforementioned visual nerves which were of course quite feminine as looking into a reflection they looked a little thick in a puddle! While that was happening his snout was starting retract and shrink back into his skull, becoming less sloped and large like a real horse and more becoming more dainty and feminine, lips puffing out a little as his now enlarged eyes centered themselves in from the extra space made from the now smaller, girly muzzle.
This would cause him to have a coughing fit as it caused his neck to tingle from the throat being modified from the said snout shrinking back in. But as he coughed his voice was rising in octaves, losing its masculine, boyish sounding touch to it as his vocal cords lessened with his thinning neck which would accustom it to more of a beach-girls accent which was quite as cool as his old voice, just in a femal-ish way and perfect for a Surfing-Girl! His chest and shoulders also caved in and cracked a bit, losing a bit of muscle to make way for more delicate features along with his legs and hooves on both sides shrinking and thinning with a pristine feel to them. He was feeling a lot lighter now from the decreased muscle that just happened.
It was of course not over yet! Her thighs and flank were bubbling out, becoming more rounder and curved which felt a lot smoothed out and less squared as the tail was now fully grown during that. Just as that was going on He cringed a bit as a tickling sensation in-between letted him know that something slipped away, sealing the fate of his voice which sounded 100% girly and energetic now. His stallion hood was no more now and that was amplified from all the organs rearranging and churning, chromosomes switching and the exterior changes signalling that. And to top it all off, three ginger spots had popped up on each side of her cheeks, making her blush a bit but still felt very fine indeed. He, now She could only look now at her new feminine and Filly body, her cutie mark was left unchanged as her hair drooped down in which she flicked it into a curly but drooping finish. Now the tingling and feeling of the sequence had finally stopped...Sandbar could only pose and blush a bit on her cheeks as now she was...Sea Shoal! That was a good name right?
TG Sequence End ---
After doing some experiments and tests with her new female body. Like doing some poses on the beach, bathing in the sun, styling her hair and tying some into a nice ponytail and combing it when she found a band and a comb conveniently placed here, singing a bit and talking like she was acting for some sort of play. It was really feeling quite fun for the now Filly student, the dopamine was rushing through her brain and she just loved being a beach girl! But then she stopped, looking to the idly sitting Sand-potion she thus trotted over to it, remembering that it was the second transformation that would be even greater and bigger than before. Wasting no time and taking a guzzle of the brown liquid it tasted very sandy, almost like bread crumbs as she gulped putting a hoof to her throat as the taste...wasn't that great to be honest. But as the liquid entered her body she could feel the sand she was standing beneath her begin to gravitate toward her like a magnet...this made her go wide-eyed in amusement but now her body began to feel like it was falling apart!
TF Sequence Start!:
As the sand began to accumulate around her hooves she felt bonelessness begin to spread up them...and that was reinforced when she saw her fur coat turning into grainy, yellow-ish sand which was racing up like it was being filled. raising up a leg she saw that it was dripping a bit like it was wet, but it didn't hurt. It made her gasp for sure, but she was just anticipating it nonetheless! The sand was racing up, passing her hocks and knees with the same pouring feeling coming from them as she felt the control of sand seep into her more, beginning to feel like the sand was a part of her body as a sandy hoof was picking up the ground sand like a crane! Thus the conversion had reached her shoulders and spreading onto her torso she felt warm, more malleable in a fact as her tail was quickly overtaken with the sandification of the filly, all painting over her like it was a filter as her cutie mark was now a dark black like it was drawn pristinely with a pen-sized stick.
Her body was dripping with sand but she didn't mind at all, she felt whole still while sinking her hooves into the sand like a melting ice cream as the final changes began. The sand was creeping up to her neck, with bones, organs and flesh all but vanished and replaced with solid, soft and grainy sand which was even warmer now. The head was eventually enveloped by the changes, the mane being replaced by tiny sentient grains of sand which were like the cells of her body, now dripping with sand and surprisingly the band that kept her hair in a ponytail was also converted, and the ponytail stayed on which made the Female Earth Pony smile. Her facial features were of course spread over now, despite that she could still talk, breath, hear and speak now as her features were now sandy drawings that were animated and moved with her every movement of mouth, eyes, snout and face in general. And thus...it was done!
TF Sequence End ---
Sea Shoal was now a full being of Living, breathing, talking, shapeshifting construct of Sand, or more accurately. A Sand Elemental! And ironically, it was fitting if she was still Sand-bar as it was an ironic pun! She reconstructed her legs, standing up again and just pranced around in celebration, feeling no sorts of hotness in her steps of the hot sand and feeling infinitely more energetic and powerful...She was the sand! And it felt great as new fun would be discovered in this new extraordinary form. Firstly, she jumped up into the air, doing a front somersault off of a rock and then let her entire sand-woven body break apart, basically falling into the sandy floor below like someone threw a bucket-full of dry sand. She blended in so well into it. And with a chuckle she eventually bubbled out and reformed out of the floor like a phoenix, dusting her sandy self before then getting another idea as she grinned.
This time sniffed in her nostrils, also still there and functional after the Sand-conversion as she began to build up internal elemental energy, charging up something inside her sandy form...and looking toward the same rock in which she would use as a target, She then blew her nostrils which sent two streams of torrential sand hitting the rock like it was an accurate super soaker! Another ability discovered for the Sand-filly as she felt proud...and speaking of which...returning to her surfboard and Potions...she grinned even wider and chuckled deeply...this was gonna be the best test yet in her mind. And that would be to test out Shape-shifting!
First, taking a deep breath in which her mouth could open wider thanks to the painlessness of being literal sand. She then melted into the beach, temporarily never to be seen for the moment as she was seeming to be looking for stuff to grab and take...around the beach Three Flags which were colored in Sandbar's color scheme with one having and "S" another having a "B" and one having two "S"s were suddenly pulled under like it was some quicksand, it was Sea Shoal using the beach who was now a part of to snatch them for her project~ And in a short time pink seashells were being pulled under left right and center it was like a game of whack a mole but in reverse! But then two columns of the same seashells were being surfaced, being made into some sort of path leading toward where the Potions and Surfboard are. Some of the shells were in the middle for something...but now it began.
Just as it was just a calm, smooth beach with a few accessories embedded and plopped onto it, a bubbling began to rumble the sand that was right in the potions path like it was a geyser about to erupt. Suddenly two cones had shot out like pop-ups on a carnival ride with two circular balconies built down below, dripping with sand as they rose higher and higher...behind the cylindrical towers a bigger cylindrical foundation and shape with a spire was also rising like an obelisk out of the sand as a booming but playful laugh rung across the coastal paradise. The sand was doing its work with constructing the arch windows on the side towers, decorated with the same pink shells on the sides of them with the flags being rearranged and sprouted onto the cone-shaped roofs of the new towers, having the blocky overhangs just for people to lookout upon...if it was strong enough of course.
The front of the Castle was already opening up the Gateway, with a Bar-like gate being integrated that could be absorbed and grown anytime to let her friends in anytime while above the said entryway which was decorated with a overhang, A huge structural front was made to have three large arch-windows right above the overhang which would suit to be an elegant look for the exterior and show the royalty that would be in the interior which will be a secret.
Finally a cylindrical main-tower had already been constructed at the base, ovular windows dotting the upper sides of it with the School of Friendship symbol materializing at the front underneath the windows, along with the potions being stationed on each side, a bowl-like funnel also formed at the very top, making way for a certain filly to sprout up with bubbling sand...
Sea Shoal finally rose up from the bowl like a Slime as she knew it, only the Sandy type! As her hooves and mane poofed out with some grains flying everywhere to make for a flashy entrance as she yawned loudly before giggling cutely at the "SS" Flag being stuck on her mane, cute touch! Looking down at her Castle-body, she could feel everything on this newly made building...she could bend and warp the towers the way she wanted, she could 'open and 'close her gate and could of course bend her main tower around like a snake thanks to the malleable sand that she was now made of.
After a test in which she managed to telekinetically rise up a giant hoof to grab the Inflatable Surfboard and stick it into the sand and using another to make a tentacle wrap and pull a coconut out of a tree, she felt like one more thing to do before relaxing out in the hot sun. She waved her hooves around her head in a wavy manner and then looked to the ocean, beckoning her sand-hoof for it to come over...and by that a body of water suddenly sprung out and splashed onto her eyes which made her gasp and flinch a bit! But blinking her decal-ish eyes she saw she had water-constructed Sunglasses on...how nifty as it made her just grin before waving to her head.
As she did that, a Crown began to materialize right on her head with seashells creeping up her Castle to come join the said conjuration, it was being shaped like a castle tower with how blocky it looked but after a little while it was firmly placed...or now fused with her body, a fitting final change for the Sand-filly!
Now feeling like she was the Ruler of the Beach she gave a happy and loud sigh before then resting her hooves to the back of her head, before then looking to you with a huge smile and a grin. Would you like to play with her? Come in? Who knows. She would like to have some subject friends~ But I swore that beach ball just moved a bit...
THE END.
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So how was my Story? I must admit i'm a bit unconfident in my writing skills and I would love to see your comments. Feel free to share this around and give sergeant16bit some well earned love in making this. But yeah! Hope you enjoyed! Please fav and comment! :D Maybe even take it to Derpibooru! You have permission!
MLP FIM belongs to Hasbro
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Sandbar the Earth Pony was quite excited and happy today as he got a nice day-off at the nearby beach for getting a good grade in the School of Friendship that he was enrolled in. Twilight, with the new potions that she had worked on which were transformative in many ways also had a plan for him too, giving two bottles to him which one was a a brown colored flask with a picture of a sand splotch with a starfish on it, it smelt a bit...sandy. The other was a pink, sweet-smelling flask which had the two gender symbols together, in which Twilight told him to take the latter first before the former. Sandbar gave another excited squee...not only that he was going to the beach he was taking two of these transformational potions to try along with him! And to that, grabbing his inflatable surfboard, which was previously transformed for fun by Twilight which still functioned despite its rubbery anatomy, what fun.
Now cutting to the said beach with a suspiciously laying around Beach Ball colored in a certain Changeling's scheme...and a normal Palm Tree. Sandbar sighed, letting the hot sun drape over his lime green fur coat and hair, thus after finding a nice sandy mid-area of it he took out the potions from the little saddle pack and placed them down. And without further ado, He thus took the the Gender Potion and thus took a nice glug of it and smacked his lips. it tasted like cherry to the Colt...for now... As his body began to tingle quite after three seconds which made him gasp.
TG Sequence Start!:
Sandbar could feel a ruffling feeling in his mane and tail for the first part which urged him to scratch his head. As he did that...he noticed his mane was starting to grow and strand down, becoming more longer and wavy like water as they seemed to feel a lot smoother than a Colt's mane...it was more prominent at the rear as his hair there was reaching down to his shoulders of his front hooves! His tail was also starting to shake and quiver like it was cold, but it felt warm strangely. It was starting to grow longer too, becoming a lot more wavy as a result as the tail began to droop down from the new weight of the new strands. Though the weight wasn't much.
Next up in the sequence was his eyes as they began to expand a lot larger now, becoming a bit narrowed in with eyelashes starting to sprout and grow out the outer rims of the aforementioned visual nerves which were of course quite feminine as looking into a reflection they looked a little thick in a puddle! While that was happening his snout was starting retract and shrink back into his skull, becoming less sloped and large like a real horse and more becoming more dainty and feminine, lips puffing out a little as his now enlarged eyes centered themselves in from the extra space made from the now smaller, girly muzzle.
This would cause him to have a coughing fit as it caused his neck to tingle from the throat being modified from the said snout shrinking back in. But as he coughed his voice was rising in octaves, losing its masculine, boyish sounding touch to it as his vocal cords lessened with his thinning neck which would accustom it to more of a beach-girls accent which was quite as cool as his old voice, just in a femal-ish way and perfect for a Surfing-Girl! His chest and shoulders also caved in and cracked a bit, losing a bit of muscle to make way for more delicate features along with his legs and hooves on both sides shrinking and thinning with a pristine feel to them. He was feeling a lot lighter now from the decreased muscle that just happened.
It was of course not over yet! Her thighs and flank were bubbling out, becoming more rounder and curved which felt a lot smoothed out and less squared as the tail was now fully grown during that. Just as that was going on He cringed a bit as a tickling sensation in-between letted him know that something slipped away, sealing the fate of his voice which sounded 100% girly and energetic now. His stallion hood was no more now and that was amplified from all the organs rearranging and churning, chromosomes switching and the exterior changes signalling that. And to top it all off, three ginger spots had popped up on each side of her cheeks, making her blush a bit but still felt very fine indeed. He, now She could only look now at her new feminine and Filly body, her cutie mark was left unchanged as her hair drooped down in which she flicked it into a curly but drooping finish. Now the tingling and feeling of the sequence had finally stopped...Sandbar could only pose and blush a bit on her cheeks as now she was...Sea Shoal! That was a good name right?
TG Sequence End ---
After doing some experiments and tests with her new female body. Like doing some poses on the beach, bathing in the sun, styling her hair and tying some into a nice ponytail and combing it when she found a band and a comb conveniently placed here, singing a bit and talking like she was acting for some sort of play. It was really feeling quite fun for the now Filly student, the dopamine was rushing through her brain and she just loved being a beach girl! But then she stopped, looking to the idly sitting Sand-potion she thus trotted over to it, remembering that it was the second transformation that would be even greater and bigger than before. Wasting no time and taking a guzzle of the brown liquid it tasted very sandy, almost like bread crumbs as she gulped putting a hoof to her throat as the taste...wasn't that great to be honest. But as the liquid entered her body she could feel the sand she was standing beneath her begin to gravitate toward her like a magnet...this made her go wide-eyed in amusement but now her body began to feel like it was falling apart!
TF Sequence Start!:
As the sand began to accumulate around her hooves she felt bonelessness begin to spread up them...and that was reinforced when she saw her fur coat turning into grainy, yellow-ish sand which was racing up like it was being filled. raising up a leg she saw that it was dripping a bit like it was wet, but it didn't hurt. It made her gasp for sure, but she was just anticipating it nonetheless! The sand was racing up, passing her hocks and knees with the same pouring feeling coming from them as she felt the control of sand seep into her more, beginning to feel like the sand was a part of her body as a sandy hoof was picking up the ground sand like a crane! Thus the conversion had reached her shoulders and spreading onto her torso she felt warm, more malleable in a fact as her tail was quickly overtaken with the sandification of the filly, all painting over her like it was a filter as her cutie mark was now a dark black like it was drawn pristinely with a pen-sized stick.
Her body was dripping with sand but she didn't mind at all, she felt whole still while sinking her hooves into the sand like a melting ice cream as the final changes began. The sand was creeping up to her neck, with bones, organs and flesh all but vanished and replaced with solid, soft and grainy sand which was even warmer now. The head was eventually enveloped by the changes, the mane being replaced by tiny sentient grains of sand which were like the cells of her body, now dripping with sand and surprisingly the band that kept her hair in a ponytail was also converted, and the ponytail stayed on which made the Female Earth Pony smile. Her facial features were of course spread over now, despite that she could still talk, breath, hear and speak now as her features were now sandy drawings that were animated and moved with her every movement of mouth, eyes, snout and face in general. And thus...it was done!
TF Sequence End ---
Sea Shoal was now a full being of Living, breathing, talking, shapeshifting construct of Sand, or more accurately. A Sand Elemental! And ironically, it was fitting if she was still Sand-bar as it was an ironic pun! She reconstructed her legs, standing up again and just pranced around in celebration, feeling no sorts of hotness in her steps of the hot sand and feeling infinitely more energetic and powerful...She was the sand! And it felt great as new fun would be discovered in this new extraordinary form. Firstly, she jumped up into the air, doing a front somersault off of a rock and then let her entire sand-woven body break apart, basically falling into the sandy floor below like someone threw a bucket-full of dry sand. She blended in so well into it. And with a chuckle she eventually bubbled out and reformed out of the floor like a phoenix, dusting her sandy self before then getting another idea as she grinned.
This time sniffed in her nostrils, also still there and functional after the Sand-conversion as she began to build up internal elemental energy, charging up something inside her sandy form...and looking toward the same rock in which she would use as a target, She then blew her nostrils which sent two streams of torrential sand hitting the rock like it was an accurate super soaker! Another ability discovered for the Sand-filly as she felt proud...and speaking of which...returning to her surfboard and Potions...she grinned even wider and chuckled deeply...this was gonna be the best test yet in her mind. And that would be to test out Shape-shifting!
First, taking a deep breath in which her mouth could open wider thanks to the painlessness of being literal sand. She then melted into the beach, temporarily never to be seen for the moment as she was seeming to be looking for stuff to grab and take...around the beach Three Flags which were colored in Sandbar's color scheme with one having and "S" another having a "B" and one having two "S"s were suddenly pulled under like it was some quicksand, it was Sea Shoal using the beach who was now a part of to snatch them for her project~ And in a short time pink seashells were being pulled under left right and center it was like a game of whack a mole but in reverse! But then two columns of the same seashells were being surfaced, being made into some sort of path leading toward where the Potions and Surfboard are. Some of the shells were in the middle for something...but now it began.
Just as it was just a calm, smooth beach with a few accessories embedded and plopped onto it, a bubbling began to rumble the sand that was right in the potions path like it was a geyser about to erupt. Suddenly two cones had shot out like pop-ups on a carnival ride with two circular balconies built down below, dripping with sand as they rose higher and higher...behind the cylindrical towers a bigger cylindrical foundation and shape with a spire was also rising like an obelisk out of the sand as a booming but playful laugh rung across the coastal paradise. The sand was doing its work with constructing the arch windows on the side towers, decorated with the same pink shells on the sides of them with the flags being rearranged and sprouted onto the cone-shaped roofs of the new towers, having the blocky overhangs just for people to lookout upon...if it was strong enough of course.
The front of the Castle was already opening up the Gateway, with a Bar-like gate being integrated that could be absorbed and grown anytime to let her friends in anytime while above the said entryway which was decorated with a overhang, A huge structural front was made to have three large arch-windows right above the overhang which would suit to be an elegant look for the exterior and show the royalty that would be in the interior which will be a secret.
Finally a cylindrical main-tower had already been constructed at the base, ovular windows dotting the upper sides of it with the School of Friendship symbol materializing at the front underneath the windows, along with the potions being stationed on each side, a bowl-like funnel also formed at the very top, making way for a certain filly to sprout up with bubbling sand...
Sea Shoal finally rose up from the bowl like a Slime as she knew it, only the Sandy type! As her hooves and mane poofed out with some grains flying everywhere to make for a flashy entrance as she yawned loudly before giggling cutely at the "SS" Flag being stuck on her mane, cute touch! Looking down at her Castle-body, she could feel everything on this newly made building...she could bend and warp the towers the way she wanted, she could 'open and 'close her gate and could of course bend her main tower around like a snake thanks to the malleable sand that she was now made of.
After a test in which she managed to telekinetically rise up a giant hoof to grab the Inflatable Surfboard and stick it into the sand and using another to make a tentacle wrap and pull a coconut out of a tree, she felt like one more thing to do before relaxing out in the hot sun. She waved her hooves around her head in a wavy manner and then looked to the ocean, beckoning her sand-hoof for it to come over...and by that a body of water suddenly sprung out and splashed onto her eyes which made her gasp and flinch a bit! But blinking her decal-ish eyes she saw she had water-constructed Sunglasses on...how nifty as it made her just grin before waving to her head.
As she did that, a Crown began to materialize right on her head with seashells creeping up her Castle to come join the said conjuration, it was being shaped like a castle tower with how blocky it looked but after a little while it was firmly placed...or now fused with her body, a fitting final change for the Sand-filly!
Now feeling like she was the Ruler of the Beach she gave a happy and loud sigh before then resting her hooves to the back of her head, before then looking to you with a huge smile and a grin. Would you like to play with her? Come in? Who knows. She would like to have some subject friends~ But I swore that beach ball just moved a bit...
THE END.
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So how was my Story? I must admit i'm a bit unconfident in my writing skills and I would love to see your comments. Feel free to share this around and give sergeant16bit some well earned love in making this. But yeah! Hope you enjoyed! Please fav and comment! :D Maybe even take it to Derpibooru! You have permission!
MLP FIM belongs to Hasbro
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