Rewritten and re invented... I think the nightmare theme is a recuring thig for me...
Kaphiri discovers a few side effects of food addiction and over eating
Kaphiri and kin are copyright me
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Kaphiri discovers a few side effects of food addiction and over eating
Kaphiri and kin are copyright me
Thank you for your continued patronage.
PLEASE COMMENT
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Jackal
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 7.7 kB
Really enjoying this series so far. Always had a soft spot for soft Jackals, and this one is no exception. :)
Your description of Kaphiri's growth is a pleasure to read, and the only thing I can really offer by way of constructive criticism is that you tend to be a little inconsistent with capitalising the beginnings of sentences. That's a minor gripe if anything, though.
Hope to read more from you soon!
Your description of Kaphiri's growth is a pleasure to read, and the only thing I can really offer by way of constructive criticism is that you tend to be a little inconsistent with capitalising the beginnings of sentences. That's a minor gripe if anything, though.
Hope to read more from you soon!
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