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Chapter One: The First Meeting
The first actual chapter after the intro chapter. Story by my sis Alto, hosted on my account until she can get her own. The first meeting of the characters Ammy and Thalia while aboard the airship Avalon, where they first being trying to unlock the magics of the watch.
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The first actual chapter after the intro chapter. Story by my sis Alto, hosted on my account until she can get her own. The first meeting of the characters Ammy and Thalia while aboard the airship Avalon, where they first being trying to unlock the magics of the watch.
Previous/First Chapter: Intro
Next Chapter: Chapter Two
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 7.6 kB
the start didn't grip my attention, but the second paragraph did, much improvement from detail from the .. chapter 0, in my honest opinion, she brought in the word love to soon. but other than that, its improvement, dialogue is fun to read too
10/10 for this one, it was fun to read
keep writing
10/10 for this one, it was fun to read
keep writing
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