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I thought this was very good for a "first vore story" and reminds me of the time I was walking my own big Malamute and he sniffed out, and gulped down whole a little bunny hiding in the grass without even a single chew! Aside from the animals talking it was nice that this was an otherwise realistic setting where the animals are true to their natural sizes and are dominated by humans (for otherwise there would be no domestic dogs). The vore related descriptions were very good, and showed some real anatomical knowledge, like the stomach's constant, rhythmic churning, and it actual location in the dog's body which insured any prey movement could only be seen on the side that the stomach actually lays. Also having the rabbit lose consciousness due to lack of air, rather that instantly starting to dissolve as if dropped in a laboratory beaker of very strong acid was a realistic and welcome change from most stories. I liked the idea that Zoe knew her human owners would not approve of her gulping down a "cute and innocent" little bunny, and cleverly concealed the evidence, by only presenting the opposite side of her body to their line of vision. The story seemed woefully short though, and I am sure many readers would have liked to have also read "the rest of the story", with a continued narration of how Zoe broke down the bunny, and and the inevitable scat finish, which of course could be marked in a way to be avoided for those who do not want to read it. In this storyline, this would be a appropriate addition, due to the fact that as surely as Zoe was careful to prevent her owners from knowing she had swallowed a bunny, she would likewise be careful to prevent them from seeing her droppings that would look noticeably different than usual, with fur and probably fragments of the larger bones being quite apparent, and pile probably much larger than usual too, due to all of the bulky, indigestible fur that her body could not absorb. I can see great potential with this character in future stories, with her challenge of gobbling up cute, small animals which has become a kind of an "addiction", but without her human owners ever knowing about it! I can imagine a bit darker tale along these lines that might have something to do with a her discovering a temporary unguarded basket of adorable, bite sized kittens in a neighbors patio! Thanks for sharing, and keep up the good work!

Thank you for the feedback! Appreciate it! I've read quite a few dog vore stories now and I thought that I could make one that's in a more realistic setting. I understand that some people do like scat, personally I'm not and since this was my first story I decided not to do it. But I may to in a future story. I also wasn't too focus on the length of the story because that can often cause it to drag on and get a bit boring. But I'll always try to work on these things. Again, thanks for the feedback! :)

There is a big difference between "scat" as a weird perversion like eating it or bathing in it, and simply recognizing it as a necessary aspect of any realistic story involving digestion. It is particularly so in depicting realistic canine behavior as it is sort of a "calling card" to others of their kind, which is why it is often deposited in prominent places with the deliberate intent of being noticed by fellow canines. In the case of this story it is even more significant in that the dog doesn't want to let here human owners learn of her secret predatory urges and diet (as it would likely result in her being leashed to prevent her predation), which would be likely if they noticed her dropping after a "forbidden meal". It is unfortunate that there is a true scat perversion among a rare few, because it makes some writers and artists afraid of using this biological matter of fact in ways to make their work more realistic, rather than prudishly pretending nobody ever has to "go to the bathroom" in the worlds they create.

Sorry for the late reply, but I have now written another story that includes a bit more into what happens after the prey losing conciseness in the stomach. Not the most in-depth, but its included. And its a bit of a longer story too. So hopefully you'll enjoy it! ;)

Nice

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That was a good read. Thanks for sharing this great story :)

Thank you and your welcome! :)

Yup, i agree this is pretty good story. Well done!

Thank you so much! :)