Okay, so much for the battle.... and so much for the city too.
Part I: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3908915/
Part II: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3910854/
Part III: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3913895/
Part IV: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3919983/
Part V: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3920019/
Part VI: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3923894/
Part VII: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3929457/
Part VIII: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3932465/
Part IX: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3933567/
Part X: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3934034/
Part XI: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3935674/
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Part I: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3908915/
Part II: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3910854/
Part III: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3913895/
Part IV: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3919983/
Part V: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3920019/
Part VI: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3923894/
Part VII: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3929457/
Part VIII: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3932465/
Part IX: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3933567/
Part X: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3934034/
Part XI: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3935674/
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Category All / Macro / Micro
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1209 x 892px
File Size 317.4 kB
Hhmm, I think your procedural assembly of drawings made you more vigilant against size errors. For example, the buildings were about the same size from part I to IV, but now they are way too big compared to her, just look at the size her feet had in comparison to the buildings, and the size they have now (they're much larger). According to the story, she's not shrinking, so the buildings are clearly much larger than they should be.
After saying all that, I have to say the scene is quite cute. I've noticed you have a very particular way to draw feet (for birds: thick and short toes), hehe. Ahh, all artists are unique :}
After saying all that, I have to say the scene is quite cute. I've noticed you have a very particular way to draw feet (for birds: thick and short toes), hehe. Ahh, all artists are unique :}
Thanks for the critique once again. The buildings were honestly a tired afterthought. I was kinda feeling fatigued after drawing them, (dispite continuing for another 5/6 hours after that). So I went back and redrew them to a better scale. I fixed up a few things in earlier pics in the sequence too, all pretty minor though.
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