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First, when you read, open this beat http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J-b6qCVwcB0
I had to write this for a stupid group project. The assingment in my class was to form a group and tackle 4 words and do something to show there meanings.
In this case, I decided to write a rap. Please note, I didn't go Grammar Nazi on this one, it too was rushed.
So yeah, also, this is one of my better ones and I thknk I want to actually take a mic and rap this one. Heres the beat that goes hand in hand
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J-b6qCVwcB0
I had to write this for a stupid group project. The assingment in my class was to form a group and tackle 4 words and do something to show there meanings.
In this case, I decided to write a rap. Please note, I didn't go Grammar Nazi on this one, it too was rushed.
So yeah, also, this is one of my better ones and I thknk I want to actually take a mic and rap this one. Heres the beat that goes hand in hand
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J-b6qCVwcB0
Category Poetry / Rap
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 4.4 kB
its just this four times
We need to think what we can do differently
and stop the rascism and bigotry hastily
if not now then never cause it won�t matter.
We�ll be incapable of landing on a shore forlorn
Inundated by our situation.
Inundated from our actions
inundated as a consequence
inundated inundatedly by inundation.
Luckily its not too late to act.
and 3; 15 line versus
We need to think what we can do differently
and stop the rascism and bigotry hastily
if not now then never cause it won�t matter.
We�ll be incapable of landing on a shore forlorn
Inundated by our situation.
Inundated from our actions
inundated as a consequence
inundated inundatedly by inundation.
Luckily its not too late to act.
and 3; 15 line versus
rap isn't exactly known for its proper grammar haha although it more depends on the artist/style and the way you say it i can really tell, but lyrically your stuff kinda reminds me of immortal technique so with proper grammar the rap would flow better i believe
long story short, i see why you wanna grammar check it
long story short, i see why you wanna grammar check it
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