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This is my idea for a duet with me and 
Lilyness
Hopefully you'll see the full thing with one of the parts switched out for her, soon.
Lyrics:
eggshells lie broken on the tile
as is the past turning present condition of your smile
tattered and torn lie the corners a wishing well left dry
why would you stop to say goodbye
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
now I want it back
All that you had to do was wait
left lying naked on your shortly empty dinner plate
never enough to abate the waves of burning pain
I thought I’d leave the message plain
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
now I want it back
now I want it back
I came here alone
and alone is how I want to leave
I found you alone
and alone is how I’ll leave you
oh----
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
now I want it back
LilynessHopefully you'll see the full thing with one of the parts switched out for her, soon.
Lyrics:
eggshells lie broken on the tile
as is the past turning present condition of your smile
tattered and torn lie the corners a wishing well left dry
why would you stop to say goodbye
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
now I want it back
All that you had to do was wait
left lying naked on your shortly empty dinner plate
never enough to abate the waves of burning pain
I thought I’d leave the message plain
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
now I want it back
now I want it back
I came here alone
and alone is how I want to leave
I found you alone
and alone is how I’ll leave you
oh----
I gave you all of me
I gave you all of me
now I want it back
Category Music / Rock
Species Canine (Other)
Size 120 x 96px
File Size 4.27 MB
Vocals could use a bit of reverb. Your voice records so wonderfully clean...I'll have to look into your setup some time, 'cause it's nice. But basically, if the reverb isn't similar between the vocals and the instruments, it starts to sound like the guitar was recorded in a gym, but the vocals in a tiny soundproof room ^^;;.
Sounds good. Great lyrics as well. I'm imagining a much heavier version of this with some heavy distortion right at the line "I want it back!"...
Aaaanyway...I'm rambling xD.
Keep it up, man! I'd love to hear this when it's finished ^^.
Sounds good. Great lyrics as well. I'm imagining a much heavier version of this with some heavy distortion right at the line "I want it back!"...
Aaaanyway...I'm rambling xD.
Keep it up, man! I'd love to hear this when it's finished ^^.
ACTUALLY I originally intended for this to kick into distortion near the end, but it didn't sound very good. I can't seem to get distortions right.
And I can never decide whether or not to reverb stuff. I usually don't cause I like my cleanness but then the guitars do seem to end up with some and... ugh I hate mixing. I'm so bad at it.
Thank you though
And I can never decide whether or not to reverb stuff. I usually don't cause I like my cleanness but then the guitars do seem to end up with some and... ugh I hate mixing. I'm so bad at it.
Thank you though
The program that I use is pretty good for effects, and I'm not usually very busy. I'll put effects on a track for you, even if you're just curious to hear what it would sound like ^^. Since effects are kinda tough to get a handle on, I'd give you a list of the changes after as well.
Unfortunately, I can't .
Since I'm not using a Mac/apple computer, I can't run Garageband...so...unfortunately, you'd have to mix down each individual instrument to send to me (If you wanted effects on each instrument done separately, which is the best way to do it xD.). And that translates to a lot of work on your end D=.
If you'd be willing to take the time to mix all that down and send it, then I'd be glad to help...but that's like...5 or 6 tracks that would need to be mixed down to at least 192kbps tracks if you wanted fairly good sound quality. But, if you're willing to take the time, I'll still help =D.
Since I'm not using a Mac/apple computer, I can't run Garageband...so...unfortunately, you'd have to mix down each individual instrument to send to me (If you wanted effects on each instrument done separately, which is the best way to do it xD.). And that translates to a lot of work on your end D=.
If you'd be willing to take the time to mix all that down and send it, then I'd be glad to help...but that's like...5 or 6 tracks that would need to be mixed down to at least 192kbps tracks if you wanted fairly good sound quality. But, if you're willing to take the time, I'll still help =D.
wins ! sounded really good.
I'm just saying I could add a distortion layer near the ending, cause cubase 5 has awesome distortions and it certainly is missing something, though it might not even be necessary cause another vocal might fill it . anyway the music AND lyrics are really awesome !
I'm just saying I could add a distortion layer near the ending, cause cubase 5 has awesome distortions and it certainly is missing something, though it might not even be necessary cause another vocal might fill it . anyway the music AND lyrics are really awesome !
Wonderful! I wouldn't know the first thing about distortion~ I don't hear anything wrong with it though, don't know what all the fuss is about, care to expand?
I bet it'll sound greater if you get her to sing, hopefully she'll have time. And I especially like that strong rhythmic section at around 2:17
I bet it'll sound greater if you get her to sing, hopefully she'll have time. And I especially like that strong rhythmic section at around 2:17
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