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Trying To Sum Up Philomela's Story 😅
The funny part was that after i wrote all the above the person i was talking to (and asked permission to post) just said:
It's hard to read in that form, to be honest.
Also many people might not have the attention span for so much info all at once.
Your story can be parsed down further to:
"she is an automaton that was a work of passion who experienced traumatic things as a mechanical being and becomes vengeful. Then the story becomes a redemption arc."
Then you can add a link, to where they may read more - the less links the better.
Otherwise you risk overwhelming people, especially the casual one, who is simply curious.
I... don't really know if that is a good summation, but it does sum up at least one facet of the story, so i guess it works.[h1]😅[h1]
It's hard to read in that form, to be honest.
Also many people might not have the attention span for so much info all at once.
Your story can be parsed down further to:
"she is an automaton that was a work of passion who experienced traumatic things as a mechanical being and becomes vengeful. Then the story becomes a redemption arc."
Then you can add a link, to where they may read more - the less links the better.
Otherwise you risk overwhelming people, especially the casual one, who is simply curious.
I... don't really know if that is a good summation, but it does sum up at least one facet of the story, so i guess it works.[h1]😅[h1]
Category Screenshots / Miscellaneous
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File Size 450.7 kB
https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....-Moon-Children
here you will find what has been already illustrated as well as the "encrypted" (it's rot13 sooo... that's a big stretch of the word, basically a spoiler protection) version of the image by image summary of the story.
here you will find what has been already illustrated as well as the "encrypted" (it's rot13 sooo... that's a big stretch of the word, basically a spoiler protection) version of the image by image summary of the story.
Philekdikisi will be shown in Philomela's story... since well.. Philekdikisi IS Philomela after she rebuilt herself in a sort of "edgy teenager witchy way" kind of thing (does not really apply to robots, but... oh, well...)
this was supposed to show Philomela's pieces melting and forming Philekdikisi in a sort of "christine" way. But it never got done because partly miscommunication and partly because i liked the artist's take.
Philophana has her own comic: https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....adama-Mothley/
In any case i try and tag my characters with at least one tag that cannot be anything but them. So it's easier to find them. For Philekdikisi and Philophana the tag is simply her name (though they have several) because it's a really weird name.
this was supposed to show Philomela's pieces melting and forming Philekdikisi in a sort of "christine" way. But it never got done because partly miscommunication and partly because i liked the artist's take.
Philophana has her own comic: https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery.....adama-Mothley/
In any case i try and tag my characters with at least one tag that cannot be anything but them. So it's easier to find them. For Philekdikisi and Philophana the tag is simply her name (though they have several) because it's a really weird name.
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