Tainui fumbled nervously with his backpack, drew out another datapad and studied it for a few moments before handing it to the warrior with obvious reluctance.
"This is kinda hard for me. There's something I've gotta do shortly and there is a chance...Well, if I don't come back I want you to give that to Two-Talon for me."
"Not come back?" Hunts-In-Grass' eyes widened with alarm and he quickly lurched to his feet again, stepping closer to Tainui as if to prevent him from running away. "What exactly are you planning to achieve?"
After spending a couple of minutes bringing him up to speed on the Taniwha project, Tainui was grabbed roughly by the warrior and held in a vice-like grip, the talons digging painfully into his skin. "Hrrr, that course of action is madness! This one cannot permit this!"
"Goddammit, Hunts! As a warrior, I would've expected you of all people would understand," Tainui growled at him, desperate to prevent the waver in his voice from choking him up. "I'm not doing this 'cause I want to, I'm doing it 'cause I have to. Don't you get it?" he pleaded. Reaching up he rested a hand on the warrior's chest and dropped his voice to little more than a whisper. "I failed in my promise to protect Andrej. But I'm not gonna fail in protecting you two."
Hunts-In-Grass recoiled as if stung, releasing him from his grasp. The problem was that he did understand what was driving the small, brave human. And if their situations were reversed he would be doing exactly the same thing. However, Tainui had already sacrificed so much and it struck the warrior as being wrong for him to be expected to give up the last, most precious gift he had to offer: His life. Even if it was being offered freely...
"And you do this without coercion, hrrr?"
"Yeah. I volunteered. You guys will have your hands full and are needed here. There isn't a lot more that I can do -"
"This one believes you have already contributed enough. The Original Home fleet is hurting because of the innovations you provided for us."
Tainui shook his head. "You know as well as I do that it ain't enough. Please! Just promise me that you'll give that bloody datapad to him if anything happens to me, alright?"
"What is preventing you from communicating this to him yourself, hrrr?"
Tainui avoided meeting his friend's eyes and turned to fumble with the zip on his backpack, irritated with himself for showing weakness in front of the warrior. "I dunno if I can, bro," he muttered quietly, knowing full well the warrior would have no difficulty in hearing him. "I dunno if I'm brave enough to do that with what I'm about to do. He might try to talk me out of it. And... and I'm scared he would succeed."
Hunts-In-Grass glared at the datapad as if it might explode in his hands and sighed, realizing the human was right about Two-Talon's likely reaction. While he didn't like it, as a warrior he respected Tainui's decision.
"Hrrr...Very well. If this one survives the approaching battle then he will deliver your message. Be certain you do return so this one is not forced to perform this onerous task, however! You know this one does not desire to lose you also."
"Heh - I'd miss you too ya daft, emo bugger. You guys are my family now; a scary, demonic, alien-lizard family, but still family." He laughed, trying to dispel the serious mood that had overtaken them both. "Don't worry your little lizard head about it. I have no intention of dying out there anytime soon."
Pocketing the datapad, Hunts-In-Grass stood up and pulled Tainui into a tight four-armed embrace, crushing the human against his chest. "There will be dire consequences if you break that promise, little-one. Stay safe and may the Revered Ancestor's guide you, strange, silly little human."
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Scene from my first novel - The Cold Wind - illustrated by the talented 343GuiltySpark from DA: http://343guiltyspark.deviantart.com/
"This is kinda hard for me. There's something I've gotta do shortly and there is a chance...Well, if I don't come back I want you to give that to Two-Talon for me."
"Not come back?" Hunts-In-Grass' eyes widened with alarm and he quickly lurched to his feet again, stepping closer to Tainui as if to prevent him from running away. "What exactly are you planning to achieve?"
After spending a couple of minutes bringing him up to speed on the Taniwha project, Tainui was grabbed roughly by the warrior and held in a vice-like grip, the talons digging painfully into his skin. "Hrrr, that course of action is madness! This one cannot permit this!"
"Goddammit, Hunts! As a warrior, I would've expected you of all people would understand," Tainui growled at him, desperate to prevent the waver in his voice from choking him up. "I'm not doing this 'cause I want to, I'm doing it 'cause I have to. Don't you get it?" he pleaded. Reaching up he rested a hand on the warrior's chest and dropped his voice to little more than a whisper. "I failed in my promise to protect Andrej. But I'm not gonna fail in protecting you two."
Hunts-In-Grass recoiled as if stung, releasing him from his grasp. The problem was that he did understand what was driving the small, brave human. And if their situations were reversed he would be doing exactly the same thing. However, Tainui had already sacrificed so much and it struck the warrior as being wrong for him to be expected to give up the last, most precious gift he had to offer: His life. Even if it was being offered freely...
"And you do this without coercion, hrrr?"
"Yeah. I volunteered. You guys will have your hands full and are needed here. There isn't a lot more that I can do -"
"This one believes you have already contributed enough. The Original Home fleet is hurting because of the innovations you provided for us."
Tainui shook his head. "You know as well as I do that it ain't enough. Please! Just promise me that you'll give that bloody datapad to him if anything happens to me, alright?"
"What is preventing you from communicating this to him yourself, hrrr?"
Tainui avoided meeting his friend's eyes and turned to fumble with the zip on his backpack, irritated with himself for showing weakness in front of the warrior. "I dunno if I can, bro," he muttered quietly, knowing full well the warrior would have no difficulty in hearing him. "I dunno if I'm brave enough to do that with what I'm about to do. He might try to talk me out of it. And... and I'm scared he would succeed."
Hunts-In-Grass glared at the datapad as if it might explode in his hands and sighed, realizing the human was right about Two-Talon's likely reaction. While he didn't like it, as a warrior he respected Tainui's decision.
"Hrrr...Very well. If this one survives the approaching battle then he will deliver your message. Be certain you do return so this one is not forced to perform this onerous task, however! You know this one does not desire to lose you also."
"Heh - I'd miss you too ya daft, emo bugger. You guys are my family now; a scary, demonic, alien-lizard family, but still family." He laughed, trying to dispel the serious mood that had overtaken them both. "Don't worry your little lizard head about it. I have no intention of dying out there anytime soon."
Pocketing the datapad, Hunts-In-Grass stood up and pulled Tainui into a tight four-armed embrace, crushing the human against his chest. "There will be dire consequences if you break that promise, little-one. Stay safe and may the Revered Ancestor's guide you, strange, silly little human."
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Scene from my first novel - The Cold Wind - illustrated by the talented 343GuiltySpark from DA: http://343guiltyspark.deviantart.com/
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Thank you - the artist did a great job of interpreting both the character and the scene. And yep - I have written two novel-sized stories that I have attempted to have professionally published. Gave up on that idea though (it was an idea pushed by my editor/agent, not myself). Links to them on my profile page if you are interested, although they are sci-fi, not furry works
The more "demonic" look actually works better for the Vanguard, I think, than the smoother lines they had before. It makes them look even more alien while still retaining something that humans can (somewhat) relate to... though it might not be something they'd want to relate to.
Awesome work, as usual. And I really need to get onto reading those stories of yours, goddammit. >.< They're PDF files, yes? Perhaps I can download them onto the Kindle mom's work is sending me. Much more likely to read it then.
Oh, I haven't started that story I told you about yet. >.< Was going to start it yesterday, but the stitch removal turned something into a... painful fiasco. I will start it soon, I promise! (Hopefully soon, now that I turned the goddamn TV off. Addicting piece of shite.)
Awesome work, as usual. And I really need to get onto reading those stories of yours, goddammit. >.< They're PDF files, yes? Perhaps I can download them onto the Kindle mom's work is sending me. Much more likely to read it then.
Oh, I haven't started that story I told you about yet. >.< Was going to start it yesterday, but the stitch removal turned something into a... painful fiasco. I will start it soon, I promise! (Hopefully soon, now that I turned the goddamn TV off. Addicting piece of shite.)
Aye, quite agree with you, actually - and will definitely be pushing the more demonic aspect to the look of them in future commissions I think. "You're not pretty, but you're my kind of 'not pretty'!"
Uh, yeah I think I saved the stories most places as PDF but am happy to email them through in any other format you want - I use Open Orifice so ODT by default but can do the MS formats also. Oh and hey, did you get my emails regarding that Princess Peach story you sent me?
Sorry to hear about the stitch removal turning into some sort of disaster Looking forward to seeing what you come up with, very much... you are a much better writer than I could ever hope to be, damn your scaly hide to hell!
Uh, yeah I think I saved the stories most places as PDF but am happy to email them through in any other format you want - I use Open Orifice so ODT by default but can do the MS formats also. Oh and hey, did you get my emails regarding that Princess Peach story you sent me?
Sorry to hear about the stitch removal turning into some sort of disaster Looking forward to seeing what you come up with, very much... you are a much better writer than I could ever hope to be, damn your scaly hide to hell!
Hey, I'd do them. I think the demonic-looking aspect actually works far superior to their original looks, as I said before. I could give you some interesting psycho-babble about innate fears and what not, but that would take too long to type out, and I'm a bit rusty on certain aspects of the psychology that I majored in. >.>
Unfortunately, the Kindle (still trying to think of an 'offensive' name for it, not easy), only handles either the book formats from Amazon, or PDF, so I'll need them in PDF format. Didn't you send them to me at one point? I need to check my e-mail and see if they're still there, because I honestly don't remember if you did or not.
And yes, I did get your e-mail with regards to the Princess Peach story. Besides the lovely (I think) reptile/human lesbianism, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I was pleased to know that it was fairly accessible, even to those not familiar with the Mario universe. Of course, the trick is to keep people interested and doling out just enough information so people know what's going on without going overboard. >.< Always a difficult task.
And really, me? A better writer than you? I'm disappointed that you would smoke something so premium as to think that, and not offer me any! Who's that who has three wonderfully awesome books under his belt? Hmm... oh yeah, I think that would be YOU.
*mutters, "Better writer my scaled ass."*
Unfortunately, the Kindle (still trying to think of an 'offensive' name for it, not easy), only handles either the book formats from Amazon, or PDF, so I'll need them in PDF format. Didn't you send them to me at one point? I need to check my e-mail and see if they're still there, because I honestly don't remember if you did or not.
And yes, I did get your e-mail with regards to the Princess Peach story. Besides the lovely (I think) reptile/human lesbianism, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I was pleased to know that it was fairly accessible, even to those not familiar with the Mario universe. Of course, the trick is to keep people interested and doling out just enough information so people know what's going on without going overboard. >.< Always a difficult task.
And really, me? A better writer than you? I'm disappointed that you would smoke something so premium as to think that, and not offer me any! Who's that who has three wonderfully awesome books under his belt? Hmm... oh yeah, I think that would be YOU.
*mutters, "Better writer my scaled ass."*
Heh, I am fairly certain that if some sort of shrink or psychoanalyst read anything I had written they would have a field day telling me all about it having to do viz my mutha... Let alone the design of the critters! That's alright - SANITY IS FOR THE WEAK! I might have sent the stories to you at some stage in the past, not certain. But let me know if you haven't got them and I can fire them through to you again in that format if you like. Hmm, offensive name for a Kindle... Kuntle?
Your handling of interspecies lesbian erotica was done in a very tasteful, well-written manner, my good Sir - which is what prompted the comment about your writing being considerably more advanced than my own. I cannot write erotica to save myself. Not to mention making an otherwise unknown story-line/characters/universe accessible to someone unfamiliar with them. That takes some doing, so please give yourself some credit. You have to admit that your work is already streets ahead of most of the drekk available on-line these days.
Your handling of interspecies lesbian erotica was done in a very tasteful, well-written manner, my good Sir - which is what prompted the comment about your writing being considerably more advanced than my own. I cannot write erotica to save myself. Not to mention making an otherwise unknown story-line/characters/universe accessible to someone unfamiliar with them. That takes some doing, so please give yourself some credit. You have to admit that your work is already streets ahead of most of the drekk available on-line these days.
Unfortunately, I have not been able to find any indication that the stories were ever sent to me. Odd, as I swear they were. I may have mistakenly deleted them during the manic and drug-hazed 'spring cleaning' while at Bethesda. >.< I would have to have them, and the Vanguide, of course. Perhaps if you have PDFs of them? If not, I think the Kindle would allow me to load the actual documents, but if so, I need to read up and see exactly how it's done with that fun little device (fun, but still needs an offensive name ). Regardless, having multiple copies in multiple formats would be a good thing for back-up.
I have to admit, I have a taste for the sweaty, tangy, faint dirtiness of interspecies relationships, regardless the genders involved. But really, how am I really any better than you? A slim, serpentine female tomboy (Becky) and her wonderfully geeky and ass-loving boyfriend (Chris), versus your alien, four-armed powerhouses and incredibly developed human characters? And regardless what you might think, you do write wonderfully done gay sex.
And, yes, even I will admit that my writing is miles above a lot of the... depressing trash that has the audacity to masquerade as "writing".
Oh yes, I've started building the framework for the story for you. Here's some key-words, just to torment you. *cackles gleefully*
Marines sergeant and lance corporal
Afghanistan, outpost in desert
Outpost in Marjeh, maybe?
Manned guard post, covered with cammie netting. Fifty cal. deterrant.
Post undermanned, lance corporal only one manning post.
Time of day? Evening, night, early morning? Darkness for safety.
Tired, dirty, frustrated with circumstances.
Sweaty, dirty cocks
Lube? Vaseline stolen from motor t guy?
Marines motor t or grunts? Decide.
Human, work on features, skin color
Look those phrases over, and enjoy letting your wonderful imagination run wild
I have to admit, I have a taste for the sweaty, tangy, faint dirtiness of interspecies relationships, regardless the genders involved. But really, how am I really any better than you? A slim, serpentine female tomboy (Becky) and her wonderfully geeky and ass-loving boyfriend (Chris), versus your alien, four-armed powerhouses and incredibly developed human characters? And regardless what you might think, you do write wonderfully done gay sex.
And, yes, even I will admit that my writing is miles above a lot of the... depressing trash that has the audacity to masquerade as "writing".
Oh yes, I've started building the framework for the story for you. Here's some key-words, just to torment you. *cackles gleefully*
Marines sergeant and lance corporal
Afghanistan, outpost in desert
Outpost in Marjeh, maybe?
Manned guard post, covered with cammie netting. Fifty cal. deterrant.
Post undermanned, lance corporal only one manning post.
Time of day? Evening, night, early morning? Darkness for safety.
Tired, dirty, frustrated with circumstances.
Sweaty, dirty cocks
Lube? Vaseline stolen from motor t guy?
Marines motor t or grunts? Decide.
Human, work on features, skin color
Look those phrases over, and enjoy letting your wonderful imagination run wild
I am already drooling at the concept. I have a thing for military boys, it has to be said... DO IT!!!
Okay, various stories on their way to you now in PDF format The Vanguide is not complete but once it is I would be happy to fire it through to you if you like. Unless you want to see what I have written of it so far. Hmm, as for offensive names, you have a rather fertile imagination - a product by a company called Amazon - famed for large, busty female warriors? I dunno, there must be something in there.
I do dig interspecies (and interracial) relationships, as you say there is something faintly forbidden and delicious about them that really does appeal. And I tell you what, let's just agree that I am a drooling, retarded fanboy of your work and leave it at that, ja?
Okay, various stories on their way to you now in PDF format The Vanguide is not complete but once it is I would be happy to fire it through to you if you like. Unless you want to see what I have written of it so far. Hmm, as for offensive names, you have a rather fertile imagination - a product by a company called Amazon - famed for large, busty female warriors? I dunno, there must be something in there.
I do dig interspecies (and interracial) relationships, as you say there is something faintly forbidden and delicious about them that really does appeal. And I tell you what, let's just agree that I am a drooling, retarded fanboy of your work and leave it at that, ja?
*chuckles* Only if I get to be a drooling, retarded fanboy of your work in turn. I'm guessing you liked those key phrases well enough. Hopefully, I may be able to work on this, possibly finish it, this weekend. Unfortunately, it'll most likely depend on pain levels, which have been increasing quite a bit lately, much to my... irritation and everyone else's potential injury.
And I would love to see what you have for the VanGuide, currently. Who knows, might spark some new questions to give that already awesome mind of yours something to mull on.
And I LOVE interspecies/racial relationships. Like you said, that faint taste of forbideness, and tabooism. It tastes of mint, sometimes a delicious and subtle brew of berries with a dash of spice. *shivers* Mmm... I'm sorry, where were we?
Oh, and I found a hilarious cartoon I think you would certainly appreciate it, if Daze hasn't already shown it to you. Oglaf.com. Quite amusing, I'm catching up on it as much as i can.
And I would love to see what you have for the VanGuide, currently. Who knows, might spark some new questions to give that already awesome mind of yours something to mull on.
And I LOVE interspecies/racial relationships. Like you said, that faint taste of forbideness, and tabooism. It tastes of mint, sometimes a delicious and subtle brew of berries with a dash of spice. *shivers* Mmm... I'm sorry, where were we?
Oh, and I found a hilarious cartoon I think you would certainly appreciate it, if Daze hasn't already shown it to you. Oglaf.com. Quite amusing, I'm catching up on it as much as i can.
We can be drooling, retarded fanboys of each other... Hmm, that sounds vaguely disgusting, wrong and why am I slightly turned on? Well, no pressure on you for writing the story - I am aware that your circumstances are less than ideal so don't push yourself into doing anything that is going ot make your quality of life worse, okay? THAT'S AN ORDER, SOLDIER! You now have a copy of the partially completed VanGuide - and I welcome anything in the way of questions or criticisms that will make it better.
OMG... that cartoon... it is like sweet, sweet candy for the soul. Thank you very much for pointing me in the direction of it. Marvelous stuff
OMG... that cartoon... it is like sweet, sweet candy for the soul. Thank you very much for pointing me in the direction of it. Marvelous stuff
To quote the old movie PCU, "That's tasteless, disgusting, and offensive... I like it." Fabulous movie, if you've never seen it. It's a slam against the PC-insanity of the early-to-mid nineties, so it's a bit dated, yet... still surprisingly accurate.
And just so you know, quickest way to piss off a Marine is to call them a 'soldier'. Them's Army folk, ya damn civie! I always find the bristling of being called a soldier to be hilarious, considering the true origins of the Marines. While the U.S. Marines were officially brought into existence in 1775, their true origins were as Army sharp shooters assigned to naval ships to help fend off pirates. Funny how Marines are loath to remember that little detail, eh? *smirks*
I figured you'd love that cartoon, shame there's not more to it. I do hope they continue to make more of it, I find it refreshingly decadent and surprisingly light-hearted, in a cruel, sadistic way. Perhaps if one's heart belonged to Genghis Khan, maybe.
Damn my muse, I have the plot outline phrases, but the little bastard/bitch refuses to cooperate so I can actually begin writing it. *wants to scream and throw things* Damn this place and this injury, they're wrecking everything!
And just so you know, quickest way to piss off a Marine is to call them a 'soldier'. Them's Army folk, ya damn civie! I always find the bristling of being called a soldier to be hilarious, considering the true origins of the Marines. While the U.S. Marines were officially brought into existence in 1775, their true origins were as Army sharp shooters assigned to naval ships to help fend off pirates. Funny how Marines are loath to remember that little detail, eh? *smirks*
I figured you'd love that cartoon, shame there's not more to it. I do hope they continue to make more of it, I find it refreshingly decadent and surprisingly light-hearted, in a cruel, sadistic way. Perhaps if one's heart belonged to Genghis Khan, maybe.
Damn my muse, I have the plot outline phrases, but the little bastard/bitch refuses to cooperate so I can actually begin writing it. *wants to scream and throw things* Damn this place and this injury, they're wrecking everything!
Oooh, not familiar with PCU but from your brief description and what I have found by searching the net on it, it is likely to be right up my alley I appreciate the recommendation, thank you.
Ah, good ol' military nomenclature - my apologies, you know I do not intend any insult. As part of basic training for military types, is stuff like military history taught to most? Or is it more a case these days of push them through as fast as possible to get them on the battle-field? That is the impression I am getting from what I see portrayed in the media at least. I had wondered where marines fit into the over-all picture of things, given that they are usually not overly associated with boats.
I would suitably reward you for pointing me at that cartoon if I could... it is cheeky, irreverent, take-no-prisoners funny. Very much my kind of humour
Just be patient with yourself, aye... The aggravation and frustration you feel must be driving you crazy, let alone the pain. Sure I am looking forward to the story but your health comes first, aye. Look after #1 first and foremost!
Ah, good ol' military nomenclature - my apologies, you know I do not intend any insult. As part of basic training for military types, is stuff like military history taught to most? Or is it more a case these days of push them through as fast as possible to get them on the battle-field? That is the impression I am getting from what I see portrayed in the media at least. I had wondered where marines fit into the over-all picture of things, given that they are usually not overly associated with boats.
I would suitably reward you for pointing me at that cartoon if I could... it is cheeky, irreverent, take-no-prisoners funny. Very much my kind of humour
Just be patient with yourself, aye... The aggravation and frustration you feel must be driving you crazy, let alone the pain. Sure I am looking forward to the story but your health comes first, aye. Look after #1 first and foremost!
Ah well, all I will say is that it might not be the most perfect picture in the world but I am happy with it The broken tusk is one of Hunts' specific features, an old injury sustained when he was but a young 'un undergoing warrior training... so I made sure the artist added it in... gives the guy some character.
Thank you for the nice comments, my friend!
Thank you for the nice comments, my friend!
Original work...hmm, well come to think of it, I don't think I have anything original online to show. I mean, I do have my origins story for my At Home comic characters, but those are short. I have nothing of considerable length to show you. I used to have these original stories that I wrote for my senior seminar class back in university, but they're long gone now =/
Nonsense, you're not old! I think you just don't know enough game universes to follow what I'm saying. A basic summary: Take one character from one game universe, stick her in another one, make friends and allies there before going to a third world and then somehow find a way back to her own world. A crossover journey if you would :)
Ahhh, now THAT I understand Cross-over fanfic can be quite entertaining and a lot of fun when you have people following you who know about those worlds who can get a kick out of little things they recognise. That would be one good thing about the fanfic stuff - the references you make people would actually understand.
Thank you, my friend. Nothing is more heartening for a writer to hear than what you have just said - that you were drawn into the story and the lives of the characters so much that you could relate to them on an emotional level. It really does mean a lot - so sincerely, thank you.
No no no! D: I read no more comments from now on! I'm just going to read the stories! No more pictures, no more comments, till I read the stories! D:
Hopefully I will forget the spoilers by the time I come to that point in the storyline. Bittersweet endings tug my heartstrings. There is happiness too, yes? Yes?
Hopefully I will forget the spoilers by the time I come to that point in the storyline. Bittersweet endings tug my heartstrings. There is happiness too, yes? Yes?
I've tried to keep spoilers out of most of the submissions, but a few sneak through but nothing that should ruin anything too much for you And there is some stuff in my gallery that is fairly "generic" in terms of the Vanguard or anything else
TCW is a mite angsty... TCW2 is more up-beat And the other stories all have "happy" endings.
TCW is a mite angsty... TCW2 is more up-beat And the other stories all have "happy" endings.
I told you, I'm a dedicated reader. When I find a story that I like, it's hard for me to put it down. When/if I do, I'm usually itching to pick it right back up again when I get the opportunity.
I admit, I did start experiencing a little of something very rare for me, though; the "unfinished story phenomena." Sometimes, you enjoy a story so much, that you don't want to finish it. You don't want to know the end, because that means your imagination can play off of it and (presumably) continue the story indefinitely. That can be a difficult thing, and I admit, your little "shortstory" after TCW2 helped me with that some, it allowed me to break the "it's over" mindset, and allowed my imagination to roam again.
I admit, I did start experiencing a little of something very rare for me, though; the "unfinished story phenomena." Sometimes, you enjoy a story so much, that you don't want to finish it. You don't want to know the end, because that means your imagination can play off of it and (presumably) continue the story indefinitely. That can be a difficult thing, and I admit, your little "shortstory" after TCW2 helped me with that some, it allowed me to break the "it's over" mindset, and allowed my imagination to roam again.
This is pretty freakin' epic right here. <3
And, while I prefer the more reptilian appearance (*cough* narcissism *cough*), I think I could get used to this. The more texture they have, the prettier it looks when naughty things happen all over their faces. :D
On the more serious side, though, this just reminds me how much I loved TCW1. And how much I want TCW3. D:
Squirt out those creative juices faster, man! The Vanguard are getting impatient, and you *know* you don't want testy reptiles! You want reptile teste- *murdered by the PG rating of this pic*.
And, while I prefer the more reptilian appearance (*cough* narcissism *cough*), I think I could get used to this. The more texture they have, the prettier it looks when naughty things happen all over their faces. :D
On the more serious side, though, this just reminds me how much I loved TCW1. And how much I want TCW3. D:
Squirt out those creative juices faster, man! The Vanguard are getting impatient, and you *know* you don't want testy reptiles! You want reptile teste- *murdered by the PG rating of this pic*.
Thank you, my friend Heh, I actually prefer the more demonic aspect to the appearance of my boys - that is probably closer to what they would be like IRL if they existed. Heeeeee... naughty things happen all over their faces... can you imagine an "O-face" version done in this style? Frightening
And there you go, more amusement and laughs with your comments. Reptile teste... Well, I might... *shifty eyes* but I could never confirm or deny of course... And yes, I have been making progress (slow but still) on TCW3. Just hope that eventually when I do release it, that it doesn't disappoint after the first two. In all seriousness I am quite nervous about this - always wanted to end writing on a high note. It would be a little sad to have the third one being just mediocre.
Mmm, dripping, creative juices...
And there you go, more amusement and laughs with your comments. Reptile teste... Well, I might... *shifty eyes* but I could never confirm or deny of course... And yes, I have been making progress (slow but still) on TCW3. Just hope that eventually when I do release it, that it doesn't disappoint after the first two. In all seriousness I am quite nervous about this - always wanted to end writing on a high note. It would be a little sad to have the third one being just mediocre.
Mmm, dripping, creative juices...
One of the scariest Vanguard head I seen but also a very unique designed one with so many small detailed placed into it!
The image just perfectly goes with this scene I can feel in the colours the "heaviness" in it as well story and picture fits so perfectly together that no words for that!
I love the fantasy mixed sci-fi touch here or at least it gives me that feeling and it looks very amazing. I could read all day with these illustrations your Vanguard stories :)))
I love the strong emotional part hidden in the picture and described very well in the scene. Amazing work both from artist and from you! :))))
The image just perfectly goes with this scene I can feel in the colours the "heaviness" in it as well story and picture fits so perfectly together that no words for that!
I love the fantasy mixed sci-fi touch here or at least it gives me that feeling and it looks very amazing. I could read all day with these illustrations your Vanguard stories :)))
I love the strong emotional part hidden in the picture and described very well in the scene. Amazing work both from artist and from you! :))))
You're very sweet to say so, thank you Cern I actually kinda like this whole demon-look to the Vanguard - they are supposed to be scary looking critters
And I am really pleased to see you adding a bit of back-story to your own work - makes it that much richer as a piece of art to have some decent background to go with it.
And I am really pleased to see you adding a bit of back-story to your own work - makes it that much richer as a piece of art to have some decent background to go with it.
It looks very awesome really!
Makes them also look more reptilian critters - I guess refusing the emotion expression from their face make it a bit steril makes it even more strong and fearsome - I love those little details <3
Lol not just back-story to my work but additional journal too xD - but I don't mind to type out the scene. If I illustrate a scene from the whole line I do that because it touches me and a strong one really. Give back the whole story what is behind that art makes it more easy to understand and make others see with my eyes the happenings. :))
Makes them also look more reptilian critters - I guess refusing the emotion expression from their face make it a bit steril makes it even more strong and fearsome - I love those little details <3
Lol not just back-story to my work but additional journal too xD - but I don't mind to type out the scene. If I illustrate a scene from the whole line I do that because it touches me and a strong one really. Give back the whole story what is behind that art makes it more easy to understand and make others see with my eyes the happenings. :))
I love this scene with this image so full of emotions <3
Also I really love this Vanguard so far he is my favourite from your story ^^ he is such a sweetie really <3
I find your gallery here one of the richest in this context anyway. I know you are no artist but the way you get images with description plus you give chance to actually read the whole story from here makes your page a living fantasy. Going on your page is something like entering the Vanguards' den <3
Also I really love this Vanguard so far he is my favourite from your story ^^ he is such a sweetie really <3
I find your gallery here one of the richest in this context anyway. I know you are no artist but the way you get images with description plus you give chance to actually read the whole story from here makes your page a living fantasy. Going on your page is something like entering the Vanguards' den <3
Thank you so much Hunts' is a bit of a strange character - he's rather young and starts off actively disliking the two "upstart humans" but later warms to them after getting to know them a bit... well, Tainui anyway.
Heeeeeee... entering the Vanguard's den you reckon? That is kinda cool Well my writing might be okay, but it is talented artists like you that really bring it to life with your beautiful works.
Heeeeeee... entering the Vanguard's den you reckon? That is kinda cool Well my writing might be okay, but it is talented artists like you that really bring it to life with your beautiful works.
Hunts' is great really I adore him. I also like his view of the whole and his very potent personality because he has a strong one. He is that character I always wish the best luck while I am reading your lines :)))
With artists you hire and your vision of this world makes your page like a living fairytale and a little gate - an escape spot from reality into something sweet and enjoyable <3
With artists you hire and your vision of this world makes your page like a living fairytale and a little gate - an escape spot from reality into something sweet and enjoyable <3
The characters and storylines I write about are very much an escape from reality for me... Writing was the only thing that kept me sane in the first couple of years while living in this country.
I envy your artistic ability though, Cern... being able to bring your own stories to life like you do.
I envy your artistic ability though, Cern... being able to bring your own stories to life like you do.
That is exactly the same reason why I draw. When I was very young I had a high fantasy story was writing it was about 102 pages and not finished (with horrible "grammar" I was too young to be able to create normal sentences). I kept drawing from this story but later I got very sick of high fantasy and I got better ideas and concepts to draw.
Actually I was drawing all the time - had a book sized art folder with me all the time but that time my mother kept trashing them because they took too much place. When I went to visit my cousins they also forced me to draw all the time and in one week I left there lots of arts which made them happy.
I know how you feel with this I all the time escaped from the reality with my arts and stories but I drew more than type.
I am still very unhappy with my arts to be honest, I still envy many other artists and would love to be like them. Also I again reached that spot where I wish to refuse to draw for myself because I feel it is useless and nobody interested in them. Again I hate my own works - I get this feeling often in a year and it really can take me down.
It can be connected with real life issues or simple when I feel that not enough feed back which turns me down. While I don't care page views, favourites I care a lot about feed backs really. Just I am not writing journals about it like many other do.
I still wish to draw like my idols or at least similar and seeing their works makes me again hate mine a lot - being an artist isn't easy if the artist is that type of who wish to improve all the time and can't stop at one level. Never being pleased with your work sometimes can be frustrating.
Actually I was drawing all the time - had a book sized art folder with me all the time but that time my mother kept trashing them because they took too much place. When I went to visit my cousins they also forced me to draw all the time and in one week I left there lots of arts which made them happy.
I know how you feel with this I all the time escaped from the reality with my arts and stories but I drew more than type.
I am still very unhappy with my arts to be honest, I still envy many other artists and would love to be like them. Also I again reached that spot where I wish to refuse to draw for myself because I feel it is useless and nobody interested in them. Again I hate my own works - I get this feeling often in a year and it really can take me down.
It can be connected with real life issues or simple when I feel that not enough feed back which turns me down. While I don't care page views, favourites I care a lot about feed backs really. Just I am not writing journals about it like many other do.
I still wish to draw like my idols or at least similar and seeing their works makes me again hate mine a lot - being an artist isn't easy if the artist is that type of who wish to improve all the time and can't stop at one level. Never being pleased with your work sometimes can be frustrating.
Honestly, any artist who reaches a place where they are entirely "happy" with their work means that they have lost the will to improve. Even the most successful and talented commercial artists will always be able to find something in their work that could be improved. So what you are feeling is only normal and healthy. Cern, don't stress that you are not like some of the other artists you admire - you have your own unique and evolving style... it is good that you aren't a cookie-cutter artist. Would you really want someone to look at your art and go "Oh, that was drawn by (other artist)!" No harm in getting inspiration from others, just be true to yourself and your own styles.
Your path might be littered with frustration, but also know that it is also littered with people who appreciate what you do, and who enjoy the visual eye-candy you produce
Your path might be littered with frustration, but also know that it is also littered with people who appreciate what you do, and who enjoy the visual eye-candy you produce
Well maybe it is just me but I can't point out "my style" because I don't feel I have any. At least usually this is the seed of my problems with my arts - I wouldn't able to tell why this and this work of mine would be "mine" while I see so many features on my idols' arts and I would recognize them everywhere.
Actually I still don't feel I really found "my style" but sometimes no matter how hard I try I can't get it right enough to please myself. Sometimes - or at least in my opinion - it is not important to make a totally perfect artwork where anatomy is perfect and lights perfect and everything else is perfect but no heart and soul in it. I also see some less perfect works which truly hit in the head because they look so damn atmospheric that you don't give a sh*t about the mistakes you simple LOVE what you see. Of course this is not bounded with those artist group who stuck at a level and don't care about improving their style and skills.
Actually there are few people I can count on my bare hand who I know like my works and ideas and that is all. From these few people you are one of those who actually respect me enough to tell your opinion and feelings about it - the others can't they are not really artists to be able to give more opinion that they like.
Sometimes it can bother me because the more feed back I get the more I can use as a handrail for my future works rely on their sights and ideas which can bust up my works.
Actually I would LOVE to show publicly my work in progress arts IF I would know I will get enough critiques what can help me with the progress. Once an art is done it is done - I can get critique on it that art won't change but I try to adopt the critiques to my next image. Once I close the image I usually merge the layers and it can't be undone. Also once I say "it is done" I will handle it as done and even if later I get good point of a mistake I won't change it because it is already done.
If I would go back every time to my finished works and edit them I never would finish my future concepts and other works >>
Phew I sure rant a lot D:
Actually I still don't feel I really found "my style" but sometimes no matter how hard I try I can't get it right enough to please myself. Sometimes - or at least in my opinion - it is not important to make a totally perfect artwork where anatomy is perfect and lights perfect and everything else is perfect but no heart and soul in it. I also see some less perfect works which truly hit in the head because they look so damn atmospheric that you don't give a sh*t about the mistakes you simple LOVE what you see. Of course this is not bounded with those artist group who stuck at a level and don't care about improving their style and skills.
Actually there are few people I can count on my bare hand who I know like my works and ideas and that is all. From these few people you are one of those who actually respect me enough to tell your opinion and feelings about it - the others can't they are not really artists to be able to give more opinion that they like.
Sometimes it can bother me because the more feed back I get the more I can use as a handrail for my future works rely on their sights and ideas which can bust up my works.
Actually I would LOVE to show publicly my work in progress arts IF I would know I will get enough critiques what can help me with the progress. Once an art is done it is done - I can get critique on it that art won't change but I try to adopt the critiques to my next image. Once I close the image I usually merge the layers and it can't be undone. Also once I say "it is done" I will handle it as done and even if later I get good point of a mistake I won't change it because it is already done.
If I would go back every time to my finished works and edit them I never would finish my future concepts and other works >>
Phew I sure rant a lot D:
Naw, I know where you are coming from, Cern. Your art is certainly distinctive to an outsider like myself - I think I would recognise your style if I saw it even if it didn't have your name attached to it You are probably too close to your own work and characters to be able to see that clearly though.
Given how new this account of yours is it will take time for you to build up the number of watchers and the like so just be patient with yourself. Don't forget, everyone has their down-times and it is only natural to wallow in a bit of self-pity every now and then. Hell, I would say it's good for your mental health to do that occasionally. Just know that there are people who like your work - hell, you wouldn't have people willing to pay you for art if your art sucked, would you?
I would say that would be the mark of a rather successful artist
Given how new this account of yours is it will take time for you to build up the number of watchers and the like so just be patient with yourself. Don't forget, everyone has their down-times and it is only natural to wallow in a bit of self-pity every now and then. Hell, I would say it's good for your mental health to do that occasionally. Just know that there are people who like your work - hell, you wouldn't have people willing to pay you for art if your art sucked, would you?
I would say that would be the mark of a rather successful artist
I changed my trademarks in my works quite often but still not really pleased with my results. Maybe you are right and I still have certain style which makes my work able to recognize but personally I can't see. All I know I am not pleased with it yet and hard to point out for myself what should I change or how.
In any case I am very glad that you like my works and actually read my long text rants and story scenes and respect me with your opinion. : ))))
I hope soon enough I will be able to settle down with a style and technique what I will like enough to improve and not change : ))))
Thank you so much for your supporting words <3
In any case I am very glad that you like my works and actually read my long text rants and story scenes and respect me with your opinion. : ))))
I hope soon enough I will be able to settle down with a style and technique what I will like enough to improve and not change : ))))
Thank you so much for your supporting words <3
I like those maori tattoos. The idea that old tribes on earth that continues to perform their rituals and traditions in a future with advanced and superios technology have always fascinated me. It shows that you can take a human beyons space, but you can't take his soul. Or something like that... :p
So strange to see a Vanguard like that caring about another person. Creatures with appearances like that are often portrayed evil. Do he like exotic massages and comedies on tv?
So strange to see a Vanguard like that caring about another person. Creatures with appearances like that are often portrayed evil. Do he like exotic massages and comedies on tv?
I'd like to think that in the future various cultures will still be around rather than everyone being just one great big homogenized mass of sameness. Keeps things interesting And anyway, gives people a sense of history which is important - people who forget the lessons taught by history are doomed to repeat their mistakes.
Aww, thank you Sir! Actually I am quite taken by Jim's (the artist) interpretation of the Vanguard as well - definitely bringing out that more demonic aspect which is something I always originally intended with them. And you're quite right, despite that aspect there is still some warmth of feeling there in the pose that softens the demonic harsh
I was kind of wondering if this was more true to from on how you wanted your Vanguard boys and girls to look. I really do like the more demonic aspect to the vanguard rather then just the straight up reptilian look, it gives them a very unique and distinct look.
Makes me wounder how Blue-Scale and Rangi would look in 343GuiltySpark's style, Speaking of Vanguard massages.....
Makes me wounder how Blue-Scale and Rangi would look in 343GuiltySpark's style, Speaking of Vanguard massages.....
*laughs* While I would absolutely LOVE to see his take on something more... spicy... I do not think he would be game for that, at least not unless I paid him like a 4-figure sum or something
As for true to form... yes. The horns are not quite what I had in mind, but other than that the rather craggy demonic look is definitely there. I guess most artists tend toward a more reptilian look because that is what they are familiar with, and to be fair I haven't discouraged them from that either.
As for true to form... yes. The horns are not quite what I had in mind, but other than that the rather craggy demonic look is definitely there. I guess most artists tend toward a more reptilian look because that is what they are familiar with, and to be fair I haven't discouraged them from that either.
Before I saw the text and understood the context of the situation, I figured this was Tainui being introduced to what must be the Vanguard version of the iPad.
"This one does not actually own it, though... the rights to use the software are owned by the all seeing warrior/entrepreneur, Punts-your-Cunt. If you violate the terms of agreement, he cuts off your service, then hunts you down, rips your head off and places it on a pike outside his corporate headquarters as a warning to others."
Fantasmical work, as I might have suspected. The more dragon-like Vanguard head is a nice shift amongst all the different varieties and takes we've seen people take up of vanguards, and I love the contrast of so fierce and intimidating a mug also being so openly affectionate and caring. I mean, besides everything else that is awesome about this picture. :3
"This one does not actually own it, though... the rights to use the software are owned by the all seeing warrior/entrepreneur, Punts-your-Cunt. If you violate the terms of agreement, he cuts off your service, then hunts you down, rips your head off and places it on a pike outside his corporate headquarters as a warning to others."
Fantasmical work, as I might have suspected. The more dragon-like Vanguard head is a nice shift amongst all the different varieties and takes we've seen people take up of vanguards, and I love the contrast of so fierce and intimidating a mug also being so openly affectionate and caring. I mean, besides everything else that is awesome about this picture. :3
Cant type, too busy laughing - "Punt-Your-Cunt"... Oh Bioxz23, you crazy bastard. Thank you, I needed a good laugh. And nice piss-take of the whole Apple iPad thing as well - gah, the hype over that fucking thing is just insane.
And nah, just Tainui being a whiny bitch about things
And nah, just Tainui being a whiny bitch about things
Heh - there is actually no sexual tension between these two. Hunts' started off being quite antagonistic and negative toward the humans but later came to respect and care for them further on in the story. However Hunts' only has eyes for another Vanguard.
Having said that, there is a Vanguard who has his sights set on poor ol' Tai, and that is Attacks-First, an Engineer. But that is another part of the story that I will not spoil
Having said that, there is a Vanguard who has his sights set on poor ol' Tai, and that is Attacks-First, an Engineer. But that is another part of the story that I will not spoil
Really touching scene. the characters you created were so thought out that when one of them died I was just like fuck why!!! Not that many writers' characters have that kind of impact on me but your characters sure did a good job of making me believe they were like real. this story was worth buying
I always look back at the stuff I wrote a few years ago and cringe a little, thinking how much better I could do it now. However that it had such a powerful effect on you emotionally means I must have been doing okay despite all the flaws I can see in it. Thank you, Cardinalsinner - your kind words do me much honor
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