This is fun as hell! Really digging the drums on this. The clarity of the rendering is pretty nice, and has a good kick. What I felt like was missing was a lower end bass. That could really elevate this track, in my opinion. It's nice that there is a variety of different melodies going on throughout. I was thinking of suggestion adding another breakdown with a bubbly rise, too, but as a whole it's rather complete. :)

baghhh
well i had waaay too much low end in the bass so i EQ'd a shit ton out from the original
lemme see if i can fix it and re-render.
check back in 10 for another listen?

will do :)

Can you stick up a 320kbps of this somerwhere like soundcloud or tindeck? I'd love to drop this into a set at Campfire Tails :)

for sure, i was going to submit that at first but its 11mb, so i'll toss it on mediafire and send a link your way when i get the new version up.
Glad you like it!

there we go
now with 100% more <50Hz :3

There's the chest thumping I was hoping for. It's boss!