everything looks good
though my immediate thought when I look at the line of the water is that its starting to go up hill.

the pose is great, the dock's perspective is nice. I love her hair.

Oh! Actually that is suppose to be "up hill" since there are usually little muddy paths for smaller animals who use the same route to get a drink of water or how small water animals crawl in and out of the pond. xD It's harder to tell in the sketch I think!

Thank you very much! I was sort of worried about my dock but I'm glad it's not to sore looking!

ahh I see well then you drew it exactly like how its supposed to be XD

and your welcome I actually really like how the dock looks. looking forward to seeing the full pic. I missed seeing your art in my subscription page.

Hehe, well I haven't been to well lately but I've been feeling a pinch better so I'll be sure to try and pump out lots of art for everyone to enjoy! Thank you!

haha don't hurt yourself too much drawing tons of art XD half a ton of art will be fine with me :3

Oh gosh no! I'm sure to be careful these days, but I do miss my daily drawing sessions. I just wish I had a scanner to show my doodles from my sketch books that I draw in every other day or so, hopefully some day I'll get a new scanner. Dx

I'm sure getting a scanner will arise. though yeah... getting used to random doodling every day would suck to have to cut back on.

if you ever wanna outsource some colouring I'd be happy to collab. I totally couldn't colour as awesomely as you do but its a little less work and I'd definitely have fun. ^_^

I hope I'm not pulling an "every other person on the internet" on you offering to collab. I really don't like being all fanlike to people so I usually be quiet and not talk about that stuff. But I decided maybe it could be a fun idea.

Oh, no no, it's okay! If you were interested in coloring my lines I could be sure to save some of my line art and share those for people who would like to practice their coloring. I'm just flattered that people would pick my lines over others out there!

I've always loved collaborating with people. I used to do it all the time on iScribble. I did one collab on FA and its one of my favorite things I helped make. I'm also a lot better at colouring than doing lineart so its actually satisfying.

incase you were interested: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2532345 this was the pic I collabbed on.

I really like the concept of this picture, it reminds me of both Pokemon and Harvest Moon, two of my favorite things. I also like the feel you have going on so far, I mean, not much beats a lazy after noon spent by the lake.
The one thing that catches my eye as a bit off is the right shoulder and arm region. To me it looks as though her weight is being supported on that arm but the position of hers shoulder really is not communicating that. If she is indeed supporting her weight on the right arm her shoulder would be pushed up, above the left one.

Hmm, you're right about the shoulders and arms. I'm really not sure what to do with teh back on, I intended to have them both holding the fishing rod but I couldn't pose it just right and got lazy and tossed it behind her. But still I'm really not liking it in general so I might still mess around with it a bit more. Thank you for pointing it out!

very nice sketch!