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It took me like 20 minutes to figure out how to post this, i'm really slow in the head when it comes to working this site, oh my royal god.
ANYWAY. I wrote this and it's probably terrible, maybe full of grammatical errors and stuff that only makes sense to me because I have next to 0 clue how to write flowing pieces like the cool guy I imitating
Here's a quick little thing of how Onyx was "Chosen" to be the Realm Lord/God that he is. Freshly awake after a struggle he has no memory of. It was a freely made decision, but his benefactors didn't explain absolutely everything to the young one...
If you like it, lemme know. If you hate it, PLEASE lemme know so i can improve and burn this piece in a holy fire
I've got a whole bunch of other stuff that i've stored up and shared with friends of mine already. I could bring them here...maybe...
Well that's all from me. Back to drinking tea and listening to smooth jazz.
ANYWAY. I wrote this and it's probably terrible, maybe full of grammatical errors and stuff that only makes sense to me because I have next to 0 clue how to write flowing pieces like the cool guy I imitating
Here's a quick little thing of how Onyx was "Chosen" to be the Realm Lord/God that he is. Freshly awake after a struggle he has no memory of. It was a freely made decision, but his benefactors didn't explain absolutely everything to the young one...
If you like it, lemme know. If you hate it, PLEASE lemme know so i can improve and burn this piece in a holy fire
I've got a whole bunch of other stuff that i've stored up and shared with friends of mine already. I could bring them here...maybe...
Well that's all from me. Back to drinking tea and listening to smooth jazz.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 96 x 120px
File Size 16.4 kB
There's some parts you could improve on, but nothing so notable that I'd feel the need to directly critique.
It's an intriguing snippet with a pretty cool character, great job! P. S: You should upload/note me with the other stuff you've written! And share some warm jazz so I can sip tea in style while reading! <3
It's an intriguing snippet with a pretty cool character, great job! P. S: You should upload/note me with the other stuff you've written! And share some warm jazz so I can sip tea in style while reading! <3
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