A popular captain of a military space ship has a teleporter ‘accident.’ The teleporter turns him into a sergal-taur thing, but doesn’t send him to his destination (a colony, just for a standard check-in). He wakes up in the medical ward with the doctors (and engineers) not knowing how to change him back to human, and the saboteur that arranged that ‘accident’ in an adjacent bed, having failed to properly kill herself.
The captain (Ryan Weston) has to fight hard to keep his rank and assignment, as not everybody is convinced he’s the same person. He’s knocked a bit down to size, as he used to have an ego that crowds him out of the elevator.
He becomes more or less a sergal-taur, with gray and black fur with red highlights, a null crotch, and really bad eyesight. In order to keep him from using the teleporter to change back, his body is full of introduced teleporter errors. Which is not good for his health.
People are turned non-human by the transporter every so often, but usually deliberately. The setting is similar to Star Trek with no (sapient) aliens, and no FTL communications. Having no way to tell people that you're arriving before you get there has interesting consequences that is not explored whatsoever in this story.
The captain (Ryan Weston) has to fight hard to keep his rank and assignment, as not everybody is convinced he’s the same person. He’s knocked a bit down to size, as he used to have an ego that crowds him out of the elevator.
He becomes more or less a sergal-taur, with gray and black fur with red highlights, a null crotch, and really bad eyesight. In order to keep him from using the teleporter to change back, his body is full of introduced teleporter errors. Which is not good for his health.
People are turned non-human by the transporter every so often, but usually deliberately. The setting is similar to Star Trek with no (sapient) aliens, and no FTL communications. Having no way to tell people that you're arriving before you get there has interesting consequences that is not explored whatsoever in this story.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Taur (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 154.1 kB
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I can say I've read one or two stories that went off like this, but this is the only one I've liked. The others all had the protagonist be unsupported by "friends" until they gave up on their humanity and identities. Although it doesn't make sense why they wouldn't just reset him to a past copy even if it means loads of lost memories. Wouldn't it just mean he is physically reset? It just seems like a cruel wat to get rid of an admirsl by denying him q chance at life.
It was very nice. Any real problem I have with the story isn't really about the story, but thoughts of how person X is q duck for doing Y, ect.
The only thing I can really say ticks me off is that they're ultimately doing the bad guy's work for him and shooting themselves in the foot by kicking the admiral out and not trying to restore him anyways. Someone had a grudge, so they help the person who is hirting the navy by getting rid officers. They may as well just admit they'll kill their own for no other reason than some nobody has a grudge. That, and why wouldn't they just give him the option of trying to become human again anyway even if hes going to have chronic health problems?
The only thing I can really say ticks me off is that they're ultimately doing the bad guy's work for him and shooting themselves in the foot by kicking the admiral out and not trying to restore him anyways. Someone had a grudge, so they help the person who is hirting the navy by getting rid officers. They may as well just admit they'll kill their own for no other reason than some nobody has a grudge. That, and why wouldn't they just give him the option of trying to become human again anyway even if hes going to have chronic health problems?
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