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Beast Chronicles: 1 - Fenrir: Howl of Freedom!
Re-edited version.
The adventure begins when a wolf escapes a forest, meeting up with a certain human.
The adventure begins when a wolf escapes a forest, meeting up with a certain human.
Category Story / All
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File Size 49.5 kB
Hrmmm, this isn5 half bad. You have a good cocnept for an overall story and basic characters. B3
Like Kyuu said, some of the dialouge seems kinda odd and you need to make it sound more natural. My advice is to read other writers stories and see how they do it and learn from them.
Otherwise, keep it up!
Like Kyuu said, some of the dialouge seems kinda odd and you need to make it sound more natural. My advice is to read other writers stories and see how they do it and learn from them.
Otherwise, keep it up!
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