It's good

comenta en español, no hay problema X3
y gracias <3

Se que puedo escribir en español, pero quiero acostumbrarme más a la escritura inglesa americana y europea; no hay problema; no sé si conoces a alguien más que sepa tocar, pero un segundo instrumento no sería mala idea... Al menos cuando esta situación terminé...

en realidad no sería mala idea meterle un teclado/piano a esto, pero... la verdad quería solo un esqueleto para que cierto cantante se montara sobre esta pista, el cantante al final no aceptó y bueh...
probablemente termine yo mismo cantandolo, aunque tengo inseguridades sobre la fuerza de mi voz (y mi equipo de grabación, que es muy basico, desgraciadamente, de hecho, me sorprende que las guitarras suenen tan bien)

Sounds very 80s. And punkish too. I wonder which direction it will go. :3
I like those few little details, like the background-ish guitar coming in at 0:30.

Thanks you a lot :3
i want to finish and sing that
but i'm shy about it because i think my voice is bad jaja, but i will do it anyway XD

Sure, go for it. :3 (Or you could try to do a collab - just mentioning it.)

its a good idea but...
i dont know who could try to sing that...

Have you looked at  punkcats works?
Or maybe  Shadowwolfens works?

About  Shadowwolfen he is taking commisions and my economic situation is not good jajaja (the salary of my country is so low, 4 dolars/month, 3rd word... x.x)

about  punkcats music, his voice is weird... so i feel that he is not really good option for this, maybe for other genre, he make punk, basically...

thanks you for your suggestions, i will look for someone else...

ah, okay.
Well, just sing it. Then probably I could give you better recommendations. Or you'll sing it just fine and to your content. :D
(Or if you find another singer on FA, most of them, I think, will not charge you money and many of them, like me, do like collabs)

Oh, i would love to make a collaboration with you, of course not rn but later...

Sure. Feel free to ask. :3