Commission for
train featuring a collage of four different female supers working the same case.
Ranger belongs to
train
Aquarius belongs to
eggplantm me
Fantastigirl belongs to
aelius
Medic Mouse belongs to
mojorover
Kind of a different pic really. I particularly like how Fantastigirl looks so badass starring off at the surroundings.
train featuring a collage of four different female supers working the same case.Ranger belongs to
trainAquarius belongs to
eggplantm meFantastigirl belongs to
aeliusMedic Mouse belongs to
mojoroverKind of a different pic really. I particularly like how Fantastigirl looks so badass starring off at the surroundings.
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1200 x 846px
File Size 1.23 MB
You can thank my brother
mistypone01 for that, as he did the original design when he did the commission of her for
train last year.
mistypone01 for that, as he did the original design when he did the commission of her for
train last year.
Hopefully you'll tell him that. Here's the url to the color that he did: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2408123/
Okay, a few quick initial thoughts upon seeing the piece (Note: the following is, by most standards I believe, quite blunt and perhaps a bit tactless, but I want to speak my mind and I am honestly not trying to be derogatory). No offence, but Ranger's outfit reminds me more of a circuit board than military camouflage. Maybe it's just the fact that there are only two colors and one of them is rather bright, combined with a red belt. It just looks really odd to me. Even if it's late evening, it still looks odd that the building behind them is completely black. It looks almost like you forgot to color it rather than being in shade, even if the sun is setting "behind" the building. The last thing is one I've noticed with other artists; the blood is really light and bright. While I realize you are not going for realism, and this is more comic style, it just doesn't look like blood. If it weren't for the body, I'd be trying to figure out what it is. The stains, on the other hand, look really nice (creepy as that may sound).
Like I mentioned with the sketch, the composition is nice, especially now that the horizon line gives a much better depth of field and POV. The shading on the characters looks great, and the coloring is gorgeous. It actually took me a second look to confirm the sky wasn't a photograph, even though I don't think you've ever used such in the past. Though looking at Ranger again, with the shading and such is looks like there's some kind of large lump under her left breast on her side that I can't discern what it is anatomically.
Sorry if the above sounded rather harsh, but I am the kind of guy who speaks his mind and rarely "sugarcoats" things so as to not hurt others feelings. I tell it like it is, though I admitt sometimes different word choices may be in order, though then the loss of directness may not get across the point I was trying to make. While I am not expecting you to recolor this in the least, I at least hope you give my thoughts some consideration for future endeavors, and understand that I am trying to help you as an artists, even though I am not one myself.
Like I mentioned with the sketch, the composition is nice, especially now that the horizon line gives a much better depth of field and POV. The shading on the characters looks great, and the coloring is gorgeous. It actually took me a second look to confirm the sky wasn't a photograph, even though I don't think you've ever used such in the past. Though looking at Ranger again, with the shading and such is looks like there's some kind of large lump under her left breast on her side that I can't discern what it is anatomically.
Sorry if the above sounded rather harsh, but I am the kind of guy who speaks his mind and rarely "sugarcoats" things so as to not hurt others feelings. I tell it like it is, though I admitt sometimes different word choices may be in order, though then the loss of directness may not get across the point I was trying to make. While I am not expecting you to recolor this in the least, I at least hope you give my thoughts some consideration for future endeavors, and understand that I am trying to help you as an artists, even though I am not one myself.
I think your comments are pretty honest. I did not design Ranger's costume though so I can't take credit for that. I just try and recreate from notes or reference.
I do need to work more on my backgrounds and I admit the blood looks like shiny, red plastic.
I appreciate your constructive feedback. It is very hard to get on this site or on my DA page.
I do need to work more on my backgrounds and I admit the blood looks like shiny, red plastic.
I appreciate your constructive feedback. It is very hard to get on this site or on my DA page.
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