It looks good! Keep trying pris!

Even if you think it took you forever, I say it was worth it. I don't think I've ever seen you draw a character this proportionate before honestly, and I think you could totally sell commissions like this if you kept this kind of style. Keep practicing of course, but Prisma this is actually a really solid image. Your art is only getting better with each new piece. Keep it up!

You can't rush a masterpiece! An art takes only as long as it takes for you to be satisfied with it. Never too long.

That being said this is really cool. I love your rainbow hair, Romeo is getting ideas from it!