you always find a way to amaze me with your work ^^

A wonderful story, good job

Thanks. ^^

Cute story, I always like reading your works. ^^

this one's the ice on the cake, zee. yet another show of beautiful writing. I'm very impressed.

loved it when Dan became a water balloon

What, he takes a magic pill and comes out on top as if nothing ever happened? It's like little kids playing cops and robbers. "Bang! I got you!" "Nuh uh! You missed! And I was wearing a bullet proof vest!" It's hard to like the dude.

It's Zee. xD He's not meant to be likable, and back when I first made him he was a bit too invincible. Read some of the later stories and you'll see things backfire on him a lot more often now.

Aw man. I feel pretty cheated that Zee didn't learn anything from this. I was on Light's side the whole time and to see Zee come out on top like he's a hero bothers me. The "it's harmless" argument falls a little short, too. Unless every person affected by Zee has Zee Insurance or something, I don't imagine the medicine to fix his pranks would be inexpensive. What about when he causes property damage with his pranks? I still want to call Zee a criminal, but maybe a lovable criminal like Sly or Lupin III.

I'm super over-examining this WORK OF FICTION in any case. Sorry 'bout that.