The first in what will likely be a continuing series of pokémon based poetry. With playing Heart Gold so much lately, I found inspiration to write about it. :3
I am rather pleased with how this one came out. Aerodactyl is just so sinister-looking. >:3 I named mine Lucifer, and I think this is rather befitting his brutal appearance.
I am rather pleased with how this one came out. Aerodactyl is just so sinister-looking. >:3 I named mine Lucifer, and I think this is rather befitting his brutal appearance.
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 481 B
This is, simply put, a PERFECT poké poem based around Aerodactyl! =O
Seriously, every word rings wonderfully--capturing the ravenous nature of that ancient predator! ^^
The rhymes are quite clean, and intone beautifully with your iambic tetrameter (which, btw, is perfect). =3
Obviously, the last couplet is a slightly different meter, but because both lines have the same meter, it's more than fine! \(^o^)/
I thoroughly enjoyed, Scier! Do keep up the great work! =)
Seriously, every word rings wonderfully--capturing the ravenous nature of that ancient predator! ^^
The rhymes are quite clean, and intone beautifully with your iambic tetrameter (which, btw, is perfect). =3
Obviously, the last couplet is a slightly different meter, but because both lines have the same meter, it's more than fine! \(^o^)/
I thoroughly enjoyed, Scier! Do keep up the great work! =)
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