Moments depicted in art from this chapter include:
"Ride Tera and Dory, his little girl"
"Tera's Cramorant"
Pokemon is © Game Freak / Nintendo
For the, like, two people who read this and may being trying to connect the dots: Umbriel and Ariel are not "Furfrou" and "Persian". I wrestled a lot with whether or not I should include them somewhere in the epilogue and opted against, with my excuse being that Deva has done no investigative work as to whether or not the two of them truly are Pokemon and any mention of their status would have been in one of those waves of text Espeon scrolled through without reading to get to the chart at the bottom.
If you have any questions, please, please feel free to ask. That was supposed to have been the whole point of this epilogue; to explain and organize as much about Tera the pelipper and his extended Poke'family as possible.
"Ride Tera and Dory, his little girl"
"Tera's Cramorant"
Pokemon is © Game Freak / Nintendo
For the, like, two people who read this and may being trying to connect the dots: Umbriel and Ariel are not "Furfrou" and "Persian". I wrestled a lot with whether or not I should include them somewhere in the epilogue and opted against, with my excuse being that Deva has done no investigative work as to whether or not the two of them truly are Pokemon and any mention of their status would have been in one of those waves of text Espeon scrolled through without reading to get to the chart at the bottom.
If you have any questions, please, please feel free to ask. That was supposed to have been the whole point of this epilogue; to explain and organize as much about Tera the pelipper and his extended Poke'family as possible.
Category Story / Pokemon
Species Pokemon
Size 120 x 100px
File Size 24.2 kB
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Found this through TVTropes, of all things. Funnily enough, I don't even have a personal interest in the vore, acquired family, and many such topics, but it was kind of fun seeing a world and story built up around this pelipper — the enthusiasm for the concept comes through very clearly.
I had really just been looking for stories playing with the whole “mixed parentage” idea, which seems extraordinarily rare. I do like what this story did with it, especially the late reveal with Espeon that I think you pulled off really well (though it does strike me as odd she'd merely be named “Espeon” if that's the case; she's nevertheless really fitting as the character that knows all Henry's secrets). The zoroark at the school was amusing, too.
Have to admit I was a little disappointed with how things ended up for Henry, less in a “I don't like how this is written” way and more in a “I wish it turned out better for everyone” way. That's presumably an expected reaction, though, especially given the implications at the very end. I'm slightly surprised I got invested in him, since he was the furthest from anything I was looking for in this story, but the chapter or two managed to pull me in, regardless. That, and maybe what actually happened to him caught me pretty off guard.
I'm glad I came across this unique little story, in any case!
I had really just been looking for stories playing with the whole “mixed parentage” idea, which seems extraordinarily rare. I do like what this story did with it, especially the late reveal with Espeon that I think you pulled off really well (though it does strike me as odd she'd merely be named “Espeon” if that's the case; she's nevertheless really fitting as the character that knows all Henry's secrets). The zoroark at the school was amusing, too.
Have to admit I was a little disappointed with how things ended up for Henry, less in a “I don't like how this is written” way and more in a “I wish it turned out better for everyone” way. That's presumably an expected reaction, though, especially given the implications at the very end. I'm slightly surprised I got invested in him, since he was the furthest from anything I was looking for in this story, but the chapter or two managed to pull me in, regardless. That, and maybe what actually happened to him caught me pretty off guard.
I'm glad I came across this unique little story, in any case!
I thought about throwing a joke in there that the Pokemon get to name themselves, and since they can only say their species names, everyone would just be all "Um, okay. Espeon it is." But it's rare for a Pokemon to be named in the anime too, so I just assume Pokemon have no interest in labels and consider it a quirky human tradition whenever they are given one.
Glad to hear you liked it. Thank you.
Glad to hear you liked it. Thank you.
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