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I'm having problems with the story line. You can probably tell. I rewrote this about five times before giving up and just going with the first one. It feels so... wrong... misplaced... cold. Boring. It doesn't have the mystical feel I was going for. Maybe I'll be able to input that in the next part and make it FEEL right.
What do you think? Any advice would be HIGHLY appreciated.
What do you think? Any advice would be HIGHLY appreciated.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 4.8 kB
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