This is one of my first every stories and i had a look at it the other day and OMG *shudder* is was awful!!! So i have touched it up and made it at least half decent with a lot of help from my amazingly kind and patent editor Eveser ,he’s on sofurry go and have a look at his stuff its GOOD (http://www.yiffstar.com/?action=watchlist).

Hope it isn’t to awful!! And all comments and ANY advice would be greatly received (might not comment straight back RL is a little crazy at the moment but i will try my best!)

Thank you so much for looking anyway!!!!

And yes i do like avatar (not the blue people) XD