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This massive behemoth of a story began as an experiment, and as a way for me to vent my "night owl" creativity, so, now we have this. I actually can't tell you how long it is, because Leafpad only counts enter-keys as lines, not line wrap. Anyway, if you're reading this, you read it. Hope you enjoyed - took quite some time, and a few tweaks, but I'm proud of how it turned out, and do plan to continue it.
As always, feedback is appreciated. Until next time, stay safe and don't get sick. Looking forward to making a next "sequel," as I think it has some room for growth and definite room for advancement.
As always, feedback is appreciated. Until next time, stay safe and don't get sick. Looking forward to making a next "sequel," as I think it has some room for growth and definite room for advancement.
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You did a great job explaining why he was out there alone and what special care he was taking so as not to encounter the raptors unprepared. I also noticed the mention of pepper spray just in case things got dangerous.
Where as I prefer a more unwilling prey and dangerous\possesive predator, I liked the scene of the raptor offering to pay the MC back for the warmth of the fire and the thought process on why he would be even remotely considering this. And of course I always enjoy the actual Vorish content even if it is willing. If this is part 1 and the MC is already tucked away inside the raptors belly I can't wait to see how things play out.
I can't promise I'll comment every time ( in fact, I rarely comment at all ) but know I at least have enjoyed each of your works so far. Suggestion wise I can't really think of anything to say outside of personal preference and kinks. You did a great job with this one and I look forward to the next installment. Take care and stay safe man.
Where as I prefer a more unwilling prey and dangerous\possesive predator, I liked the scene of the raptor offering to pay the MC back for the warmth of the fire and the thought process on why he would be even remotely considering this. And of course I always enjoy the actual Vorish content even if it is willing. If this is part 1 and the MC is already tucked away inside the raptors belly I can't wait to see how things play out.
I can't promise I'll comment every time ( in fact, I rarely comment at all ) but know I at least have enjoyed each of your works so far. Suggestion wise I can't really think of anything to say outside of personal preference and kinks. You did a great job with this one and I look forward to the next installment. Take care and stay safe man.
I really appreciate the feedback. I enjoy that someone else enjoys my work, even if my upload schedule is... inconsistent at best. I don't mind if you can't provide feedback - you're really the only one who does right now - but it's nice that my work gets some "recognition." Take care as well.
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